Hi,

I just wanted to express my gratitude for the creation of this story. i really love it and the characters are well written. I just can't wait to see where you will take Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's relationship.

Oh-uh!

But yey, things are going so good :)

Sesshy and Kags surely make a good couple XD

Keep up the excellent work!

oh what a nice little twist! hope sess gets jealous!

Brilliant! Just the thing to spice things up for a few days...her only boyfriend shows up at Sess's doorstp as his guest for three days!Pls update as soon as you can...you have me on the edge of my laptop with excitement.

AHHH!!! i have just read this story, start to finish....it's SOOOO good, and entertaining! MissTeak, what a wonderful author you are! New fav? I think so... ;)

*gasp* Oh, I knew it! The moment Hojo gets brought up and then there are 4 male guests showing up. Grr. I never liked him much either.

Forgot to add, but, youre right a guy like him would sound perfect, lol.

First poor Kagome trying to add up was cute. I totally understand her, Math was never my best friend, never will be. We just "put up" with each other. I think Sesshomaru felt happy when Kagome was talking about the future, and refering she was going to stay. I'm under the impression that a lot of people left him in the past.

Woot for computers, I would have been excited as well! And when you wrote "wasted time playing taptap revenge" I was glancing around checking to see if anyone was pointing a finger at me, lmao. Alright, so the game is addictive. Alright, so I played it for like an hour instead of doing my work... so what? LMAO!

I liked the sort of ex boyfriend thing. You know I could picture Hojo and Kagome having such a relationship, because it is basically what they had in the show. Although I never rooted for them, he wasn't a bad guy, lol. He did genuily care for her you know. He just wasn't right. I'm glad Kagome settled things with him. I didn't like that "we'll always have a soft spot for each other" though. BAD!

And why am I not surprise Sesshomaru was a long time bachelor? Typical. {lmao} (or that he was smart)

You know when you talked about Hojo, I should have known, I should have expected it, but I didn't. BUMP! THERE HE IS. I feel there will be jealousy and trouble in the next chapter!

Hun I swear, you are not allowed to doubt your artist skills anymore.

LMAO, poor Sesshomaru, he never meant any harm. When Kagome said her aim was "that good" I was thinking, no it's not. You were probably aiming for the wall to "scare him off", and your aim went off to his head LMAO! I'm so mean, but hey remember when she was learning to shoot with a bow and arrow? "Next one will hit you" LMAO. I'm glad he wasn't mad, just a bit stunned, and of course blushing because she was like right there in you know her bare clothing.

You know just when I thought you couldn't you did. You put another twist in the story. I seriously thought his mother was dead, and now I'm learning she's not. You know I'll try to come up with reasons why she isn't around now, until you tell us right? EVIL EVIL YOU! I think Kagome will be investigating this as well.

I also loved the way Sesshomaru noticed she was different, and didn't represent the Tokyo people he hates. Every day, he seems to like her a bit more, and though he doesn't always show it, we can tell through your writing that he appreciates having her around, that he is not as lonely anymore.

I agree with Kagome, he is quite the sweetheart.

Girl how do you do it? Writing so much, so fast?

You know what, the fact that Sesshomaru had no desire whatsoever to take care of the child yet knew how to do it was completely priceless. Poor Kagome, for a second, I thought she was going to throw a fit about it, lmao. And then I pictured the sight of Sesshomaru taking care of a child, and I drooled. Shh, how embarassing!

[is busy rolling on the floor dying]

Masashi is amazing. SESSHOMARU IS A MUSHROOM! AHH-AAH! Evil Kagome lead him there, but he finished the work by himself. Oh god, hold on, I'm still laughing.... Alright better. This was both cute, and hilarious. Poor thing, I'll be like Kagome now, thinking of mushrooms when I see Sesshomaru, lmao. Oh cruel! But you know Sesshomaru wasn't mad, or he wouldn't have subtely protected Masashi all those times. Told ya he was a softie. [well its your story, so of course you knew]

Sesshomaru's change in attitude can be cute sometimes, and through the lines I can read attempt to tease her as well, and I'm glad. Obviously he doesn't have much experience around people, so it's good that in his own way he is trying, and I think Kagome sees it as well. The way she was thinking over the kiss lets you know that it was the only thing she's been thinking about. How cute, like a young girl in love.

LMAO. Not looking/announcing, a room is busy FTW. {Once again, reminds me of hana-kimi} AND SHE HIT HIM! With a bottle of shampoo! Lord of the West, brought down by a bottle of Pantene Pro-V. {LMAO!} Or whatever else Kagome uses.

Me again. Obviously you can't get rid of me that easily. [insert evil laugh]

You know what, you had Kagome described so well in the previous chapters, that it came as no surprise that she was a natural at this. She's just a people person. And, I'm so glad that Sesshomaru could see that, and observe her around people. Dummy finally gets to see many sides of Kagome, although to be fair, it should be his turn to show himself, lmao.

OMG [insert shriek] The hug was so perfect, and the way you wrote it, was just spot on, I couldn't stop giggling I swear. I could picture their faces so well in my mind, I'm not kidding, I almost died. So typical, lol. And the awkward way they recover from it, as if they could just brush it off. Lmao, yeah right.

When they were asked to babysit, it was cute. First loving Kagome who headbutts Sesshomaru by saying yes, then the discomfort, lmao. I mean, I knew right away that it would spell trouble & entertainment. LMFAO. Sesshomaru called the baby a thing. Every time I re-read it, I laugh out loud.

I do love babies, but did this one chose its moment to cry. Running their perfect kiss that was coming. And you know what I'm about to say? IT fits VERY well, in the manga ambiance you wanted to give, lmao. I'm still frustrated though, lmao.

K, I just read the whole five chapters I was behind, but I'm still leaving you a review for each!

You know you're creating a good mystery around Sesshomaru. You left him so mysterious that all we want is to know more about him. Or maybe I'm the only who is just a bit impatient. But don't blame me, blame yourself for writing something so good. I really want to know what happened in his childhood-ish days, since it seems it all started there. But I know you will deliver in due time.

I love the moment where Kagome couldn't stop talking, and Sesshomaru who apparently was nearly shutting off every word or else his head would explode - lmao - just blurted out the cutest thing. Whatever happened to him, he built a shell, and somewhere deep inside, he's all soft. Ive been going manga crazy lately and gosh he fits the profile, lmao.

Their interaction are getting cuter, and you can tell that they are making progress, and getting along better. Through subtle words and descriptions, you let us see that, which is why youre so amazing. The story you made for them at the (well for the story) end was beautiful. It gave a nice touch, and wrapped up the whole thing. I do believe they heard a legend of love that will inspire love. How you made it up doesnt even surprise me, because youre mind is just that great!

MT you sly devil, you!!  Somehow, I felt like this was coming, especially with the conversation at the beginning of the chapter. But of course, a bit of competition does wonders to bring two people together! >:3  Really loved that chapter! Can't wait for more! XD

Oooo... I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru reacts! Especially since he is already a little protecttive and Kagome, being Kagome, will most likely exuberantly welcome Hojo with at least a hug...

Great Chapter! Update Soon!

I spent another lunch with my laptop and hurray for me - I managed to devour three chapters! *happy jig*

Ahem.

He came to get her back in chapter seven! Good on you, Ice Prince. Of course, the following chapters revealed that he needed her touch with the guests. Hehe...

The waterfall are a nice parallel to our interesting pair, IMHO - contrasting, complementary, entwined. :) (To quote PCK: "Like Yin and Yang. Diff-rent!" *chuckles*) Would love to see the photos!

Chapter nine had me going 0.o Poked by root vegetables? LOL. That's one scene that's begging to be drawn!

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Some competition YEs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Story getting better and better. Whats Sesshoumaru going to do. Kagome "so-called" boyfriend is a guest.*evil grin* Update soon please!!

oooh, Ima like this!  XP

Hojo's purpose has always been to be the foil, be it Yasha in the real story or Sess here in Dokuga-land. I am happy to see them interacting as well as they are. Maybe now, knowing exactly what Hojo meant to Kagome, Sess will step it up some. Next chapter will certainly be a nail-bitter either way.

Ohohohohoho this is one interesting twist of events.  >D I wonder how Sesshomaru's going to think about this? :3 I smell competition indeed! >D

I share the same sentiments as you, I never liked Hojo in the series. So wishy-washy. :|

Gahh!! Cliffy!! So looking forward to your next update:)

OMG, Hojo!  Personally, I don't like or dislike Hojo, he is a quirky, ambiguous  character who can be used in many ways.  He has some issues, obviously, which does make me wonder and think about him, his past, his psychology.  Sigh.  I love what is happening between Kagome and Sesshomaru, I am enjoying this real-life story so much.  I like that something just like this could be happening all over the world, in different forms.  Not all romance has to take place in the Rengency or Feudal Eras...  Not all knights are dressed in shining armor...