Okay, i was lazy in the last chapter so i didn't review, but you surely deserve every review possible :D
I actually liked that Hojo was there, kinda spiced things up. I still don't understand the 2 weeks thing. phew, for a moment I thought the title was talking about pregnancy! It was funny that just when I was reading the umbrellas' part, Boom! tropical storm exploded outside.
And now, about this chapter, surprise surprise, I ALSO LOVED IT. Wow landslides :/ . Thrilling! i bet that shows him to bbe more carefull when talking to people :3
jgem (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
So sweet! You're doing a great job and I can tell you are having fun with this story. It must be nice to have the "muses" working so happily with you.
Shoujo! That's exactly what I was thinking the whole time I was reading this, I kid you not! :D Oh, and you know how much I love that~! ::heart::
You know, I really commend you for writing something like this. I find it especially difficult (at least for me) to write something deep and complex, then suddenly switch to writing something with a simpler plot and completely different atomosphere - which just proves your talent! ::Bows in respect::
“And I am not ‘woman’; I actually have a name, man.” Bwahahahah, so classic. Keep up the lovely work!
Lovely start! I love how you explain the context of the story so thoroughly and in such an easy to understand way. As always, beautiful writing!
Patricia (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
awwwww! this chapter was the most adroable!!!! put hojo in his place! and the hand holding was just priceless.
KAggie (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
OMG! I just love this story! I'm not sure if I left a review yet, but better time than any I suppose. I love the character development between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. They're finally opening up to each other. And even though Hojo brought on some drama-llama, in the end, I think it was a good push for Sesshoumaru and Kagome's relationship. He helped without even knowing it! :) Wonderful, wonderful job and I can't wait for the upcoming chapters! :D
My dear, DEAR Miss Teak... I am so horrible at reviewing all the wonderful stories I read, but at this time, I have to tell you what this chapter did for me. We had to euthanize my son's beloved cat today and, after all the tears were almost done, I came in and found this update.
This chapter, regardless of what some may think about the "fluff," was JUST what I needed today. Your beautiful writing took me away from my heartache and made me forget, if only briefly, my sadness. Thank you so very much for putting so much work into your lovely stories... I have read them all and loved every single one. You are a gifted authoress with so much talent that you share so freely with the rest of us that I feel quite guilty for not reviewing more. Please know, even if I don't get around to saying so, that I LOVE your work and am reading everything you post MOST avidly!
Thank you for the respite your story gave me today, I am so very grateful!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
thats sooooo sweet!
Haha, and more evidence for my former review!
Bravo, bravo. Now, could we please change the rating to M? :P lol
Update soon!
xoxo
Aw.... this was so cute. *Sighs* Thanks for updating.
Miss C (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
I loved this chapter!! Great character development.
You know... this fanfic is really sophisticated. Not only are you very accurate with how you depict Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but it's mature, its plot is consistent, interesting, and strong, and the food, the surrounding... it all takes place in such a realistic setting that I sometimes forget that they are anime characters and think of this fanfic as a story being told.
I really like it. And I hope you update soon. :)
xoxo
Awwww! I love it when you write Fluff!!! this story just keeps getting better and better! it deserves every nomination it gets! (like me nominating it for Best Alternative)
you are an amazing writer! I really wish to vist Tsumago and experiance everything about the Japanese Culture. I cant to see how this story will end up and i am eager to find out Sessy's Past! Gah! update soon please :D
Nysrina (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
What can I say but 'awwwww~'? :D
You have fanart, by the way. Heh.
Yay! Cavities! lol
Ah, and who needs Jaken, when there's already a very ugly green monster in the Ryokan. Bad Hojo, bad -tsk-
X3
REDWOLF (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
Awwwwww......their finding real love.
hola (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
i literally squealed at the end of this chapter. so adorable!! hurray for love! gosh, i just wanna go hug something now.. *runs away to hug my dog to death* and hojo. man. i just wanna kick him in the face!! grrrr.....
Saide (Chapter 16) - Tue 06 Jul 2010
Hojo really...to sink that low. You moron! Q(>A<)O GO HOME ALREADY!!!! Sorry about this darling, I was caught up in the moment~
On the other hand...Sesshomaru's starting to open up. :3 GO KAGOME!
Why aren't they kissing yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet? :D
What have you been eating and you've updated such a juicy piece of chapter~? <3
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