oh one more thing! this story reminds me of one of my fave movies "The Killer" with Chow Yun Fat. Mostly b/c of the gangsters, the lovely singer in a club and the impossible love story and all the bullets and action. Anywho, you've got all my fave things already in the first chapter!! ;)

you've done it again! i mean, created a story that i'll be addicted to reading and anxiously awaiting future chapters of. heh, with that said...can't wait for the next chapter!!! I can actually imagine Shanghai in the 30s with your descriptions of the sights and sounds. its gonna be delicious reading to see how kag and sess develop their relationship amid all the angst and action i'm assuming will happen. yes delicious indeed...am i the only one that finds your stories so yummy i want to eat them? hmmm...as wierd as it is...its true. lol!

Wow, I can honestly say that I love this. I'm not gonna lie, I originally skipped over it, because I thought it was gonna be boring. But then I thought 'MissTeak always does really good stories' So I decided to read it and now I'm glad I did. It's amazing and I cant wait until the next chapter!!!!!

Wow, I can honestly say that I love this. I'm not gonna lie, I originally skipped over it, because I thought it was gonna be boring. But then I thought 'MissTeak always does really good stories' So I decided to read it and now I'm glad I did. It's amazing and I cant wait until the next chapter!!!!!

Oooh, what a wonderful start! I love that "Ye Shang Hai" song as well. :) This fic reminds me of a Chinese drama which I can't recall the title but I remember Vicky Zhao played in it as a songstress.

I'd say, so far so good. It's still very early into the story. Any critique would be presumptuous and obnoxious so I shall wait for more chapters to come and allow the plot to progress before commenting any further.

Keep writing and I'll patiently wait for the next chapters..

very interesting and the amount of BG info doesn't take away from the overall feeling of the chapter. GREAT!!!

oooh...very intriguing...i hope that your laptop doent't die on you!  I look forward to reading more of this...and who are you kidding... you are a sucker for a good story...it won't be your last.

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

I love it so much:) It's even better reading it here! This is so beautiful. I love you. I really do.

*weeps for joy*

I can actually picture it in my mind when I read the first few paragraphs, it's like I'm watching the movie with all the details you've put. Gyah! ;A; So pretty~ :3

Lol that was me before (tegami). I forgot to sign out of my friend's account ^^;

Uwahhhh!!! Loved it! It's just as good (better even) with the second reading!!

You do action very, very well and your descriptions paint a vivid scene without overdoing it with the adjectives.

Looking forward to the second chapter~! ;D

:D This was a great first chapter! I'm really looking forward to this story. You have such a talent for writing and I love how descriptive your wriiting is!! Keep up the amazing work :)