Reviews for Shanghai by MissTeak

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*cathstar (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Aug 2010

At first I was like...how are they gonna communicate? 

And then I remembered Chinese and Japanese shared kanji. 

And then I fell in love. 

omg.


Sakura-Chan (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Aug 2010

Absolutely epic!!!! Another spectacular chapter from an amazing writer!!! I'm sitting on the edge of my chair wiating for the next chapter.


Tana_san (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Aug 2010

Isn't it amazing how you can go about your life everyday with absolutely no problem, and then one day someone will be there and it's as if you just know your life has suddenly changed...  JEN


MomoDesu (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Aug 2010

Wow, you're quick!

The new form of communication is definitely a unique one. At least the characters hold the same meaning regardless of the language ^.^

 


EagleFeathersInMyHair (Chapter 3) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

That was so beautiful! This is why I get all excited when I get an update alert in my inbox... your words feed my soul in a way I can't explain:)

Aaaaand, black cheongsam with pearls for the win!

The song is gorgeous as well *firm nod* I've listened to it many times by now!

Thank you for giving us all such an amazing gift, my dear.

~Siki


Melly (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

Hmm...!  This is going to be interesting!  I can't wait to read the next chapters and see how they not only get over the language barrier but also the creepiness of Sesshomaru being a yakuza.  You have so many good stories in progress that it's so easy to sit here and read them while procrastinating with the things I need to do, heheee!  Update soon~! ^_________^


Mia (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

Wow, this is going to be interesting... Sesshoumaru and Kagome don't understand each other... I wonder how this romance will go...

Great Idea! Loving the entire story so far! Update soon!


MomoDesu (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

The language barrier the two have will definitely be interesting to work around! I never really thought twice about the names changing when they translated the manga into other Asian languages. Just you watch - it's going to be a trivia question one day and I'll actually know the answer, lol. 

Out of curiosity, what dialect of Chinese are you using? I did get most of it even without the translation, but what was that extra word thrown in when Kagome was introducing herself? Heh, the next time someone says that taking a year of Mandarin was useless, I can point them to this story XD


Captain Lolo (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

Great second chapter :) This must be really hard to write with the whole language barrier thing!!! Can't wait to read some more good luck!


Emmy (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

Waah XD! Excite excite!! :D


KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

XD You used their chinese name. XD I love Sesshoumaru's chinese name. I had a hard time hearing Kagome name when I was watching the cantonese version of Inuyasha. Ah Lee...XD Shippo's name in chinese is the same as in Japanese. 7 treasures. This is an interesting start. I will like to see how this goes. 


Electric (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

Another great chapter! As I've told you before, I really love how well you wrote the language barrier interaction between Kagome and Sess!

There's just something about your stories that make me want to draw... ;D


Patricia (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

I just know this story is going to be one of your best! im so worried how will they overcome a language barrier? but i know you will slowly bring them around. This is my fav an most highly anticipated story that i am reading to date!


Tana_san (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

An interesting storyline, not one that I've seen before. But then again, you are one of the rare writer's that put our beloved InuYasha cast in storylines that are most intriguing and adventurous, all the while keeping them in character with the manga/series.

I'm anxious to see how they relate to each other with the language barrier. It is a good thing that the letters/kanji are closely related enough to help them understand each other.

I also have to say that you are amazing at describing the scenes and the people just enough to give us a taste of what used to be without over compensating. You give everything just the right balance. I also adore how you are able to weave historical fact with just enough fiction to make all your fics seem as though they are reality.

You've got a wonderful beginning that I'm sure will also be a hit. I know I'm already curious.  JEN


Cinne (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010

Can't wait to get more chapters to this story! I love ittt. Never sen a Japanese Sesshomaru and a Chinese Kagome, though.

 

Will Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango, etcetc make an apperance? Maybe even Naraku?


Makuro767 (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010

Ya know, this is the second Criminal!Sesshoumaru meet Civilian!Kagome fanfic I find in Dokuga. But both have it's own appeal.. I fall in love with Crime Boss by Gabrielle and now you're in!! Wait for the fanarts!!


Tsuki (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010

:D I'm so glad Kagome figured out Sesshomaru couldn't understand Chinese. That was a great chapter! I'm sooooo excited for this story :D :D :D


Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010

I like the way you adress the language barrier without making it confusing to read. I know that some people write everything in the languages they are supposedly speaking and then translate it into english in brackets for out benefit. even though you have some phrases where you do this the spacing of them and the narration in between makes it much more pleasant to read. Very nice chapter. (May i venture a guess that they will eventually come to a consensus on what language to speak?) ^_^ great work!


Captain Lolo (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Aug 2010

wow...wow...wow great start!

You write so well, so detailed I felt like I was there please keep writing!

 

 


Lady Loveless (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Aug 2010

Love it! Love it! Love it! I have been waiting ever since you posted the drawing to read this story!! Please keep writing because I can't wait what happens next!! ^___^


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