I loved this chapter! I love that Sesshomaru is finally opening up and letting Kagome into the walls he's encased around himself. I can't wait to see what other forms of payback Sesshomaru is going to come up with for the public displays of affection Kagome was bestowing on him. I think one of my favorite scenes was when they were getting baby goldfish for Sesshomaru fishie. Can't wait for the next chapter!
When I read the MA notice in the AN, I jumped in joy.
I'm so happy that Sesshomaru went over his fear of people, and outsideness (SP?) lmao. Sorry you know me, I can't spell. It comes with being french, and all. Anyway, I was so happy. And it seems he really thinks more and more out of himself, which is why he did something for her. Not that he never did anything for her in the past, but you know what I mean. I'm just glad he did this for her, and all.
I thought their interaction was cute, ESPECIALLY Kagome stuffing her face, and of course, you know me, I wanted to stuff myself too, and it sounded so good, and I went oh wow, my love is so evil. SHE KNOWS I CANT EAT, lmao. So I hate you. No that's a lie, I love you, I could never hate you. I just want food. Lmao, so off-topic, I'm sorry. ANYWAY, I couldn't believe Sesshomaru had never eaten anything that's junk before. I WOULD DIE WITHOUT JUNK FOOD. Anyhow, I thought it was so adorable, and it showed how strong she was when she called him anata, and tried to make the evil people shut up. GO KAG GO!
Sesshomaru was so cute, and shy. At first, he didn't even go along with it, and I was like you big dummy. But since he was adorable I forgave him. AND OMG, when she stuffed the food in his mouth, I was giggling like a little child, lmao. AND SHE LIED TO KISS HIM! I MEAN OMG, how AWESOME is Kagome? SHE IS THE AWESOMEST, and you're even better for writing it, lmao. Don't worry I didn't forget you. AND SESSHOMARU wanting to play along, AHAH, he's so cute, I want to pinch his cheeks.
And then, they were catching the fishies! FISHIES! I thought nothing of it until Kagome said the faithful phrase, honestly at first I didn't think that Sesshomaru was going to play along, but he did! AND OH MY DID HE WIN! Im pretty sure Kagome's face nearly exploded from the embarassment. Who knew he was so good at this kind of games, lmao? And they caught a bunch of cute fishies for their pond! THEY ARE like a real married couple, its adorable. More than in name, more than in name.
I had a bit given up on MA in this chapter, but then the stroll happened. I thought you know a little kiss or what not, but then OMG, not only do they kiss on the middle of the freaking road, BUT OMG, he is ripping her clothes off in a mini-wood. AND MY MY ARE THEY GOING AT IT OR WHAT! I swear I was red, blushing, and bothered, LMAO! I mean, girl, you know how to write some smut, even without having it full bloon. ITS just enough to get stuff started, and it's so amazingly written. I need more, I want more.... actually as your lover I DEMAND more. Yesh yesh. Two virgins in one house is too much. LMAO.
Stupid fireworks, and people, lmao. But it was a good sexual beginning for them, lmao.
...ehmmm.. MORE?!
Madison (Chapter 20) - Thu 15 Jul 2010
First, I need to say, I loved the title of the chapter.
AND, lmao. I realized that since I read all the chapters one shot, I actually reviewed some stuff of this chapter in the last review. MY I APOLOGIZE HUN! LMAO. It's not my fault, I wanted to read one chapter at a time, but your story is so good, I devoured them all at once, lmao. I'll still leave a review for this one though. BUT I"M SORRY. Im a dimwit sometimes, lmao. Please love me anyway.
I kinda hope Inuyasha will get a heart attack, or will swallow his words once he sees Kagome. I don't know. You know when someone is rude, and you just want to see them getting what they deserve? That is sort of what I want for Inuyasha. I don't know, it would probably make me (AND SESSHOMARU LMAO) feel better. Plus, with the mouth Kagome's got on herself, I have a feeling it will happen.
Kagome is really the girl that Sesshomaru needed. You can see he's afraid of people leaving and hurting him because it always happened, and she won't run away. I'm glad she stuck by him, and she said that he was a good husband, and even though it was two words, I think it meant the world to him.
I loved this chapter.
Madison (Chapter 19) - Thu 15 Jul 2010
Sorry for my sucky delay in reviewing.
But if it makes up for it, I love you lots. <3
I thought it was so cute the way Kagome was talking to the fish, but actually refering to Sesshomaru, lmao. And their little complicity, and the way they have grown so close in the past chapters is really showing. You made their interaction evovle, and I love it. I found myself giggling in happiness. Actually every time I'm reading this story that is what happens, lol.
AND omg, a picnic, I couldn't believe it. I mean who thought Sessshomaru had it in him right? Though, since he opened up, it's not surprising. All the kissies, and what not was adorable. BUT I must say when he said he wanted to talk, I was sort of like, OMG I'll forget about love for now, because this is the interesting stuff, lmao. BUT you know I love your lovey-dobey.
For a while, I admit I thought his mother was still alive, and I was sad that she wasn't. I mean it makes so much sense considering how Sesshomaru is. I guess Sesshomaru & Inuyasha swapped story in this fic. It's not in a bad thing I mean I think that story fits much better for who Sesshomaru is. I admit when I was reading it, I had tears in my eyes. The way he had been treated as a child was not acceptable! And how everyone in their family was just, so mean towards him because of what he was. As if he asked for it. I'm glad his grandpa tried to do something about it, but I think it only made things worst for him.
The only positive thing from him being with his family was the education he got. Except for that, everything else was worst. I thought Inuyasha had called Sesshomaru "bastard" just you know cause he's a potty mouth, not because he was literally that. Poor little thing, I swear I want to hug him. I know Kagome, and I'm glad she wants to stick by him, its so like her, and I think all it does is make them closer.
And we finally found out why Sesshomaru wanted to marry her so quickly without arguing. It makes a lot of sense, and it broke my heart to think how precious that place is to him. Its like the only thing he has left of his mother, and her own story is so heartbreaking. All the work she did for that place, and every drip of blood and sweat that will never be recognized.
You really know how to write a good story.
such a fluffy ending!! twas wonderfull
fatcatmom (Chapter 21) - Thu 15 Jul 2010
Miss Teak, you certainly know how to turn up the heat! Skillfully done--perfect for a couple falling in love and using fish as the vehicle to do this with. Pls update the next installment of what happens when they get home.
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