Oh the tension! Nicely written!!! I could feel it from over here! Please continue!
Does kagome not see that shes tuning into a bit of a monster herself? Not the kind of monster Sesshomaru is, but one still the same. Disregarding everyone else's wants and desires, using people for her own gain, no matter how altruistic she thinks shes being? Just because she preceives herself as a champion of safey doesn't give her the rights to become some tyrannical dictator. Shes upset that who she was becoming infatuated with was a beast, mad at herself and scared because how could she attraction to someone so heinous? Honestly all in all I love your stories I always have, but I just cant get behind this kagomes skewered line of thinking. She acts slighted and jilted. And I'm wondering if its mix of shame for wanting sesshoumaru, jealousy becomes her "affections" were places upon others like a scorned lover.
I also wonder what sesshoumaru will do to kohaku when he realizes th "passion" he shared with kagome. I have no doubt he will ask for advise or to even just rant.
Best regard
T.I.O
Skylar (Chapter 13) - Sun 25 Nov 2018
Oh boy
ponpiri (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 Nov 2018
In a way, she's not really protecting the villagers... More like insulating herself from another perceived failure.
Alison (Chapter 13) - Sat 24 Nov 2018
Poor Kagome. And Rin chill no one wants your boy and your boy didn't want you so.
Eliona (Chapter 13) - Fri 23 Nov 2018
Great chapter, hope you’ve been having a good holiday season so far! <3
Awesome update! Can’t wait for the next one!
Eliona (Chapter 12) - Sun 11 Nov 2018
I am so excited for what is going to come next! Things are starting to get really into depth, so very intriguing! Looking forward to your next update :)
ponpiri (Chapter 12) - Sat 10 Nov 2018
Interesting. For a second there I thought you were going to throw a 2004-fanfic-era curveball and say that their father's spirit was trying to regain control through his sons. LOL!
Anyway, so that's why Tetsusaiga was speaking to Inuyasha. Just a warning that his brother is about to go HAM since the swords are connected. What happened to Tenseiga? And idk... seems like Kago is missing a piece of the puzzle. Seems like she's his taste, not these random broads that happen to have dark hair, fair skin, spunky personalities and latent miko abilities.
Also, somehow this exchanged reminded me of Clarice and Hannibal.
Alison (Chapter 12) - Fri 09 Nov 2018
More More More!!!!!
does it means why sesshoumaru prefer human because of kagome?
maybe he wanted her all a long?before inuyasha died?
maybe the beast need kagome so he begun to sleep with human but he never satisfied?so he kill them because they're not kagome.
he only wanted kagome all this time.
please forgive him kagome....
Ahhhhhhh!!! I am screaming internally! You’re good, oh your writing is as always fantastic What a chapter!!! Ahhhhh! :)
ponpiri (Chapter 11) - Mon 22 Oct 2018
This was a great chapter. I knew kagome would end up feeling regretful for what she did. Those miko garments can't cover up internal shame.
Eliona (Chapter 11) - Sun 21 Oct 2018
These cliff hangers are like on another level though xD dang... and Kohaku’s words! My goodness you are so good at really expressing character emotions. Keep up the great work xD
So angsty, but I can't stop reading.
ponpiri (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018
Well, damn.
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