Oh snap, this chapter came out of left field,lol. I never could've imagined it, but this chapter really did clear up and introduce some things you mentioned so far. My only concern throughout this whole chapter is what will happen the next day? I hope their relationship isn't ruined once she either says it'll never happen again or that it was a mistake- Kagome is a very complex character for me, even harder to figure out than Sesshomaru, so I cant even begin to figure out what she'll do nexr
Wow. The suspense is awesome! You have a way with the flow of your words? Please continue soon <3
This story is so riveting!
Definitely enjoying the additional chapters!!
Eliona (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 Oct 2018
Such a great job in teally sxpressivg Kagome’s anguish and despair Q_Q I was in tears!! Keep up the great work, really looking forward to the next chapter!
i hope kagome can forgive sesshoumaru...
poor sesshy, he's the vilain here...
want to hate him...but....it's seskag fanfic! how am i suppose to hate him?
Eliona (Chapter 8) - Sat 06 Oct 2018
Oooh! Very dark and twisted story so far xD I’m loving it, keep up the great work.
Lorena (Chapter 8) - Fri 05 Oct 2018
I know it's naturally to draw a conclusion based on this whirlwind of a chapter, but I'm curious about how Kagome will react once she's home...like how did they get to chapter one? I cant help but wonder if things may have changed had she not had her angry hidden, would he have sensed it and stopped it or would he have gone to her? Is this something completely different than his beast escaping, like an anomalous trait inu demons have?I would love to read Seshomaru's POV if it doesn't measure with your flow, I feel like even if I know so much about him, I really know nothing.
ponpiri (Chapter 8) - Thu 04 Oct 2018
"Donning her miko garb like armor, Kagome bound her messy hair high with a stretch of pure white ribbon and gathered up her things to go."
Interesting... especially considering the end of the chapter. What the other servant said wasn't far off from what Kagome's jealousy had her thinking early in the chapter. This story is really good. Is it finished already or are you writing it as you upload?
ponpiri (Chapter 7) - Wed 03 Oct 2018
Hm. My initial thought is bro in law is obsessed w/dear Kagome... so he finds human chicks that look and/or behave the same way she does, has xes with them and kills them off because he's ashamed of being obsessed with a human woman.
Or... what if the Beloved Inuyasha was the original culprit [with Tetsusaiga whispering to him and all] and Sesshou played asseccory to the crime by cleaning up afterward? Hm hm hm.
The details in this story aren't as violent as I thought they'd be [so far]. That's the only reason why I stayed away from this story for so long. So for anyone who's wondering, if you watch the ID channel on the regular, this story is far less graphic than those reenactments.
Man. . . Global warming is real.
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