Jack off. Really? Do you watch the ID channel, wondering? I feel like Kagome is going into this with most good intentions (side-eye), but she's gonna end up complicit in his derangement.
Eliona (Chapter 17) - Sat 06 Apr 2019
Omg now THAT is what you call a cliffie! You left me at the edge of my seat xD great job, very excited for the next chapter.
I've waited so long! This story has me hooked
I am DYING for an update! This is a great stoey!
Tanii (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Feb 2019
It's been soo long. I'm guessing this is why you said read at your own risk :/
I'm dying without an update but I'm sure when it comes out it will be worth the wait!
katrina (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Jan 2019
This got dark... and I like it! Oh no!!!
Wow, I’m at the edge of my seat! Please continue?
Oh shit! My anticipation for the next chapter is at an all time high! ????
Eliona (Chapter 16) - Sun 23 Dec 2018
Things are about to get heated! YAAAS! Keep it up <3
| why i feel like sesshoumaru always love?like?want kagome for a long time? like when he said there's "always" a woman in his mind.
maybe he goes crazy and deperate to have her and finally he murder all of these woman. i couldn't imagine when kagome find out that she was the cause all of the murder. i hope she will forgive herself. and why she is so bitter here....when she is always nice and pure girl.
WOW! What a way to bring him back in to the mix. The interaction between is great. You can almost taste the disappointment in his voice that he can't have what he really wants and that glamour. Oh how she was drawn to him but in side she didn't want any of it. Him looking at her at the end of the chapter. I feel like he is going to have her pinned in place as he has his way with this poor girl. Knowing that he really wants her to be Kagome just makes it better. I can't wait to see what the next chapter has to bring.
Why can she not realise that it's her that sesshoumaru wants? And that inuyasha knew it as well?
ponpiri (Chapter 16) - Sat 22 Dec 2018
Kanako reminds me of Gollum. Just... creepy and sneaky. And I know this story isn't supposed to be funny, but the way Sesshoumaru cut through Kagome's yelling about 'seducing' her made me laugh for some reason.
Skylar (Chapter 15) - Thu 13 Dec 2018
Oh wow
ponpiri (Chapter 15) - Tue 11 Dec 2018
Geez....
Eliona (Chapter 15) - Tue 11 Dec 2018
Curious... introducing a new element (character). Interested to see what you are plotting now :) great job.
| i forgot whote the women was?
i'll read it again.
i miss sesshoumaru.
but the tension between kagome and kohaku make me worried. that kohaku finally found out what kagome's hiding.
really good story!!
next please
ponpiri (Chapter 14) - Wed 05 Dec 2018
Aw, man. Kagome, what are you doing? Funny how I said in your other story that she was Inuyasha's rock, but in this story she's losing it because she lost him and her bro-in-law is a real, for real serial killer.
I'm tense wondering how this will all end.
Alison (Chapter 14) - Mon 03 Dec 2018
Honestly, I get that she's grieving hard. But her anger and bitterness is making her really unlikable as a character.
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