Inuyasha! Poor bugger. Can't seem to catch a break. Sweet twist tho!

Dang! What the heck?! Oh boy. This is going to get complicated later, I just know it. As someone who has kids, this chapter hit home pretty hard. Amazing job with this \o/

When I read this chapter, I was really happy to see Inuyasha again. I was wondering if you would show us what was happening with the gang. I really wasn't expecting the twist though. Now there are more things to wonder about like why did Kagome leave them and why Chiharu thinks everything is her fault? I thought you did really good with Inuyasha's feelings and emotions. I was really touched!

This new twist is really cool, and I like Chiharu so far. I guess the only thing that confuses me are the questions I mentioned. Like, what happened before this? Why did Kagome make her wish and what went wrong with it? But I think you will answer all of that for us like you said in your forum post. I can't wait to know what happens next so please give us another update soon! This story really feels like a fantasy book. It's awesome, so please don't leave us hanging again. I will be so sad if you do :( 

Hello again and all the warm welcomes!

I'm so glad to see you come back to work on this masterpiece. I wanted to comment on the two new chapters here since I'm all caught up now with the story. I saw your post in the forums and I wanted to leave more detailed comments about what I like or what I'm not sure about in this fanfiction. Maybe it will help?

In this chapter, I love how "real" Kagome is becoming. I was really confused when she was always fighting with Midori in her head but...I think that the way you wrote that was realistic. If I had another type of personality in my head, I guess I would feel like Kagome was feeling. I'm glad she is getting to be herself again, and now that we know that Midori was fake from the beginning we can start getting to know this Kagome. I really hope she gets her memories back!

I really liked the way this chapter started. It scared me! I really thought Kagome's arm was hurt! That was probably my favorite part.

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?! OMFG!!! fsdjfkla;fjlajf;sla I actually feel sorry for Inu D: That like never happens to me

After all these months, I thought you abandoned this fic. Then I saw your SWTOR update and had to come see if you were still here or not. I haven't read your other fic, but thought I should leave a word or two to tell ya I'm still reading and waiting for more chapters (I usually lurk). This one was really cool. I like that Kagome's character is coming out more. Katashi is shaping up to be a pretty scary dude. What's he gonna do when he finds her gone?

Yeah! Take his horse and make him embarassed in front of all his soldiers! Lovin this! Dang, couldn't believe it when I saw this on page 1, and not only that but I get to see 2 chaps. Goin to read the next. Welcome back!

What a chapter! I did NOT see this coming at all! Poor Inuyasha...what will he do when he finds out about this new Kagome? Awesome job!! PLS update for us soon!!

I'm confused....

Oh SNAP!!! I was NOT expecting a child.  What the heck did Kagome do? This story is getting more intriguing by the chapter, so many subplots. I love it.  Thanks for updating.  Your descriptions of emotions just take me on a ride.

ja ne till next time and keep up the great work

I don't think I have the words to describe what I'm feeling right now. This twist came absolutey unexpected! So much is going on here that I just don't know where to start complimenting or asking questions. So, let's just say that I absolutely adored this installment and I really look forward to see where you run with this new subplot. Judging by your pattern, I would guess that what happens in this chapter is going to be very important to the main plot, and I'm already trying to guess how this will piece together. You have a knack for surprising me though. See you next time!

-Thief 

And I'm at the end...oh no...what do I do now? Please update soon! This is going to kill me...

I'm wondering how old Kagome is in this chapter. Katashi said she wasn't "of age" yet. I guess it would help me imagine what she looks like better? Is she 14ish? 16ish? Maybe we are all meant to see it different ways. Awesome chap!

This chapter had me sitting up tense and alert from beginning to end! Ahhhhhhhhhh I want to know what's happening! I want him and kagome to see each other, but at the same time I'm so hooked on the story that I don't want it to rush anywhere. 

Whoa...this is getting complicated. Loving where this is going. Take the girl with you!! She's probably Kagome...probably?

I'm in love with this idea! Pretty sure I haven't seen a story like this anywhere in the kag/sess library. Welp...there goes my 8 hours of sleep. Gonna keep reading after all. 

Whoa...I'm hooked! Got a feeling I'm gonna go to bed late tonight because I won't be able to put my phone down.

Exciting story. Can't wait to see how it develops. All the best! 

Welcome back!!!!! I'm so glad for the update :)

I thought my eyes were deceiving me.  I'm so happy that you updated.  I hope your book did well.  Oh man, I'm so glad Kagome isn't acting like the damsel in distress anymore and is taking her life in her hands.  She was kinda getting on my nerves being Midori, which I guess is understandable cause we know she isn't that person.  I wonder what is going to happen to her though. 

ja ne till next time and keep up the great work.