I don't know what to say, dear. This world feels so real. When I read your story, I feel like I'm really living in it. Gah, and the way you write Sesshoumaru is just to die for. I always thought narrative from his point of view felt dry when reading a lot of other stories, but when I read this, all I can say is that I kind of want the whole story to be in his perspective. He's so conflicted, and ruthless, and set in his ways...but at the same time, you've given him curiosity and a willingness to learn more about the world. Even when he comes close to feeling affection for the little girl, it isn't soft. It's logic. You've really brought him to life as more than a one dimentional character. I adore this! The plot just keeps getting more and more interesting. There's really subtle hints of stuff here and there, like the dog demon fighting with all those creatures in the carvings. Keep spinning the tale, dear!

............i cant even. So beautiful.

I'm just going to go ahead and make an account here. What I do to see if this has been updated is check in at least twice a day and press refresh on the fanfiction page. There's got to be a better way! *AHEM* Now about this chapter. Here's my current state of mind after reading it: FJDSAKLFJDSLAKFJDSIOAUERJAHNGNCX<MSDAGLJSDAJFLDKJASFLKDJSALKFSA

Yeah. That's pretty much it. Now, unless you want me to track you down and poke you with a very sharp and pointy stick, PLEASE PLEASE write more. This is SUCH a cruel place to leave us hanging!

Oh wonderfully written.

This story is so so good. I remember bits and pieces of it, but I'm glad I'm starting all over because I feel like this Kagome is so much better for the story. You're so talented. I love your writing style, it's so descriptive, and I can already tell the plot is going to be epic. Please keep writing more. 

Oh...my...god...So much happened in this chapter. I'm still sitting here trying to wrap my mind around it all. Your narrative and imagery when describing the stone were incredible. I could honestly picture everything like it was happening right in front of me on my screen. I love that he finally called her "Kagome" at the end. Oh lord...please update as soon as you can. I'm absolutely stunned by how amazing this is turning out.

Ohhhh! Kags has purpose to Sesshou! This is interesting!! Eeee! I can't wait to read more!!

-Katt

Aww, so she isn't some magical being. She needs nutrients too! I love Susumu. He seems like a fun character from what I could see from your drawing. Can't wait to read more~

-MissKatt

Gods, I love how you write Sesshoumaru. His thought process is beautiful and eleoquant, just like him. I can't wait to find out about Kagome and why is the way she is. Great job!

-Katt

Quill,

This is just amazing.  The detail is on in depth without stealing your reader's imagination; AKA, it's on point. I love that Sesshoumaru was the one to stay behind and watch, as if some part of him was expecting something. Really, great job. I can't wait to read more.

-MissKatt

Pretty neat. More please!

Said i wouldnt leave any more comments (probably) but i had to leave another one. This is just too darn cool! Now i really want to know what this freaky deeky powers all about. Im so *squealmuch* to see that Sesshoumaru is finally taking her with him. Their relationship is going at a good pace. Please for the love of all that is holy, dont make me wait another week to see the next chapter. I know you have a life and all but think about our sanities!

OK, so...i never leave comments and stuff but i just had to leave something here so that youd know how cool this fic is. Not really great at leaving comments either (probably why i don't leave them) but there you go. Typing on my phone so my punctuation is crappy. Sorry.

Ive read a lot of sess/kag stories and i think this one is one of the most original ones ive seen so far. Youre so...articulate. Its a little scary. But i love how you put everything together. I couldnt stop reading from start to finish of this chapter. I prolly wont leave another comment but i want you to know that im reading this and following it with tons of excitement. TY for sharing this. 

I'm in love with this story all over again. It's so different from anything I've read. Kagome is so awesome And sess needs to just accept that she's awesome. next please

I looove this chapter!! Keep up the amazing work!

I love the idea that there are hidden places in human cities where demons reside. Also, I'm really glad to see that Sesshoumaru has changed his attitude towards the little girl, even though he still seems to hate her. At least he had her taken care of.

And I was right! Susumu made another cameo with more adorable moments between him and the girl. I'm even more intrigued now because of Sesshoumaru's memories too. Had InuTaisho really come across this villain/power before? The girl seems to know something about it all, and I can't help wondering just how much she actually knows.

Please write the next installment as soon as you can! I can't wait.

omg, I remember this story. I'm so glad you are writing again. What a wonderful start. So intrigued already. Can't wait for more.

Finally sesshy is paying attention. Great move forward.

And you continue to enthrall me with your incredible writing! At first, I was nervous about the introduction of an original character. Most fanfiction writers struggle with that aspect, but so far, I really like Susumu. I wonder what his story is and how he is going to affect this tale. You've clearly put in some effort into him, so I can't expect that he'll just make a single appearance. And where is Jaken?

The plot thickens with his report as well. Who is this human that's causing so much trouble for everyone and why is he able to fight with some kind of demon weapon? I feel very sorry for the girl, too. She's not doing well. Sesshoumaru is neglecting her, and even though I know it's perfectly in character for him to do so, I can't help but be angry with him.

She's so sweet and kind and adorable. It hurts to see that he doesn't care. Come on Sesshoumaru! Stop being so stubborn and help her! I have a bad feeling about what they're going to find in Settsu. Off to Chapter 4!