that is all.
OGFNOERGERKBIG SO CUTE!!!
I would just love to be Kagome right now with those pups!!! If kids were like them, I'd be so freaking prolific it isn't even funny!
Btw, I LOVE Sesshy losing control. So cute!
Oh poor Rin.... I love that her parents were watching over her and that she was able to overcome her grief. Splendid chapter!
OH poor poor Rin... I wonder if the storms have something to do with why she's with Sesshy instead of her family. So sweet of Kagome to help out and the pups are just too darling!
HAHAHAHA That was an AWESOME chapter! I love it when Sesshy's beast gets involved!!!
Also, phew that was hawt!!
Awww Sesshy doens't like being excluded hahahaha
Great chapter - so cute!
I can just see Rin's matchmaking wheels turning!! This chapter was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!! Aboslutely adorable and loveable! Great job!
Awwww such a cute little chapter! Perfect addition - not too long, not too short. Though I typically prefer longer chapter, this was perfect!
HAHAHAHA Loved it all!!! I can totally envision EVERYTHING here!!!
I know I have read this story before BUT I'm not sure if I reviewed...soo.... more reviews!!! I have forgotten a lot of the story so I'm looking forward to re-reading it!!
Awesome job thus far!!! It makes me wonder about Rin's age and her having lived with him for 5 years. Such a cute chapter, though! I love Kagome!!!
Melissa (Chapter 33) - Sat 09 Apr 2016
Love how you threw Marcus Croesus in there. Great reference!!!
Oh my things got serious
This was.......cute. I don't know how else to put it. It seemed straight out an anime, I felt like I was watching one. I could practically see Shippo's sweat drop and expressions.
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-Honest Reviewer -_-
Ms.Hated reviewer here to say this is wonderful! You've gainned the audience attention so easily with the pups and your amazig story structure. You set a nice pace and tone for the story. If after the first chapter I can't stop reading, you've done a fabulous job
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The Honest Reviewer -_-
this story was so good it took me a day and a half to finish it. Of course i had to sleep, but if sleep was out i would have finished in 24 hrs. i must say that you did very well on the lemons. had me think'n i was the one mated to sesshy-kun instead of gome-chan. i felt the love btwn these two characters and the love she felt for the children. i'm glad you added the taisho and higurashi family to the plot b/c it wouldnt have felt like a family bonding story if you didnt. keep writing like this and i'll be sure to look for more of your fanfics in the future. great writing. c'ya'
Such a wonderful ending.Thank you
Saiya (Chapter 44) - Thu 24 Mar 2016
So Awsome
Eva (Chapter 44) - Thu 24 Mar 2016
I've enjoyed this sweet story. Thank you for sharing your inspiaration with us. You've grown so much as a writer throughout the course of your narrative. It's time for you to summarize the plot for the story description. You can do this.
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