I really liked this story! :) The chemistry between Kagome and Sess is so good/magical! :D
Really fun story that is very engaging. The grammar can get a little distracting. Also, and I know this is just a personal nitpick, "Sess" and "Ship" are irritating to me. You've written Kagome so likable, so maybe it's meant to show her laid back nature. It doesn't ruin the story at all, it just doesn't seem like something the Sesshomaru you've written would approve of.
Kanda (Chapter 16) - Fri 03 Mar 2017
PFFFF, Kagome, you airhead! xD
Kanda (Chapter 10) - Fri 03 Mar 2017
yer scene breaks become a crescent moon and star on my phone, did you know that?
Kanda (Chapter 2) - Thu 02 Mar 2017
sesshoumaru: perfect example of why customer service jobs suck. on the other hand, it was hilarious being on the other side now, haha.
marisel (Chapter 44) - Tue 03 Jan 2017
I love lo v e this story so romantic like a fairy tale. Wow keep writing lovely stories like this. My sincere appreciations.
Such a good story
I am so close to crying right now!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love that she had twins! Goodness it's a good thing they have that big house! I am so glad that everything ended up working out and that Kags is happy and Rin opened up. Such a dynamic pack!
I LOVED reading your story. Keep up the amazing work and...
Never give up.
Never surrender!
Awwwwwww such a cute reaction! I love the twins! Such little heartbreakers!!!
Oh such an absolutely lovely chapter!!!!
I must say, you write VERY well and really bring the story to life!
Wow that seemed intense. I love how Sesshy had been teaching her about this and then it came in handy. I also love that they accept her - so cute!!!
BWUAHA the last line is epic. Your writing is soooooo enjoyable!!! I don't want this story to end!!!
The shopping... the attendants giggling... the Ramen Bar.... LOVING IT!!
Awwwww such a cute chapter! I sense lurrrrvveee brewing between Rin and Kohaku, too!
BWUAHAHAHA That was SOOOOOO HAWT and then the end there... LOVE IT!
I love your writing!!!
LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO
This chapter was just pure AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
Oh I didn't see that coming really... I likey!
I bet Miyu is gonna be doting momma-in-law now hahaha!!
WTF?!?!?!
I may be pissed at Miyu for not really looking at Kags but REALLY?!
I hope Sesshy catches her!
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