Reviews for Impromptu by angel

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Pamela (Chapter 28) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

Great chapters! Your muse did not flee:) Wow! Well we all knew Kagome would risk her life for the pups that was a given it's too bad that Sess's mom thought to try and take the kids without giving Kagome a chance to prove herself. Sess's mom is in for it. I'm sensing that Sess's beast will go on a rampage against his mom. If Kagome dies (pleads with author not to go down that path) I see Sess killing his mom. I think it would be kind of cool to have the two mom's face off at the hospital. With a loud sounding crack, Kagome's mom would slap Sess's mom for her affront. I can just imagine the cat fight, I mean dog/shrine maiden fight.  I could see the pups and Rin sneaking into the hospital room even though they are not supposed to be in there. That would be a sweet scene. Sess's mom owes everyone and apology. Kagome is awesome.


Debra (Chapter 28) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

Sesshoumaru's mom will be lucky not to end up dead. No matter the excuse she sounds nuts. With her psycho responses and attitude I wouldn't want her anywhere near my children. Not even if they are her grandchildren since her actions could have killed her grandson if not for Kagome. The poor pups are going to be traumatized. I'm pretty sure Shippo is going to truly hate the woman for getting Kagome hurt.


tazsmith (Chapter 28) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

How could you?! T.T please don't leave us hanging! I really love this story <3


Biru (Chapter 28) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

Such a terrible cliffhanger please take mercy don't torture me!


Mona (Chapter 28) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

Woah, how could his mother be the vengeful and desperate.  To kidnlap and harm her sons pups, then try to kill Shippo by running him over, smh.  I hope she gets coming, maybe when Kagome recovers she will purify her demonic energy making her human which would shorten her lifespan considerably.


Silverblossom (Chapter 28) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

oh man please please update soon. that cliffhanger oh man..I am DYING to know what happens next. oh and thank you for updating lol. :P but please please update again soon..woah things are really intensifying.


Eva (Chapter 26) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

That was good, better thaN a bucket of ice to cool off that morning fire. Kagome's mother may have settled amicably,  but I'm sure his is going to make one big stink over the mating. Her cunning plans for Kagome's shop are wasted.


roberta. (Chapter 26) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

Great update thank you love this story.


Saiya (Chapter 26) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

Hahahahaha so bleeping funny


Debra (Chapter 26) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

I so loved that you had her mom show up, that was great. It was nice how quick she took to Sesshoumaru, but she also understood how serious mating was to him. Too bad Sesshoumaru's mom couldn't be as inviting. Can't wait for the next one.


Silverblossom (Chapter 26) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

aww well atleast everything is good on Kagome's family's side. I wonder how Sesshoumaru's mother will react. Thank you for updating so fast!!! :)


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 26) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

Sweet, keep it coming.


Pamela (Chapter 25) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

A well written lemon, love scene.  They may have many battles ahead, but at least they are now mates, Hooray!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 25) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

Both chapters are good, keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 25) - Sun 18 Oct 2015

Both chalters are good, keep it coming.


M-Angel 05 (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Oct 2015

Loved the last two chapters! <3


Eva (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Oct 2015

This was beautiful and breathtaking. I didn't find it at all anti climactic.  The private mating vows were well thought out very touching nicely done.


Silverblossom (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Oct 2015

oh this wasn't anti-climatic at all. On the contrary, it was AWESOME!! YAAAYYY they are officially mates!! I hope they move in together. (^.^)

I'm sure the kids will be so happy!!! :)


Debra (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Oct 2015

Great chapter. I am so glad you had Kagome accept the mating mark. After her never having casual relationships I couldn't picture her sleeping with him and not letting him mate her.  So I thought this was perfect. His kids are going to be so happy now that it's official. 


Haven (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Oct 2015

His mother is going to be thrilled


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