I've really enjoyed reading this story! I thoroughly enjoy the depth of the characterizations and how they are very multi-dimensional. The plot is unique but believable and while not intricate, it has a lot of intrigue which keeps you hooked! I look forward to each update and seeing where all of the relationships will go. I'm still very curious about the "guy on the inside" who may have released the disease in the West. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us, and I can't wait to read the next installment!
Kousei
Tx2 (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Nov 2013
I don't think this story has enough reviews so I had to leave one. Continue to write, it's beautiful- definitely the smoothest transition I've seen in Sesshomaru on this site and just in general. It was just... Ah! Perfect. additionallly, theyre all still in character and I'm so eager for your updates, I'm entrapped in every chapter and can only be left to guess what will happen next. I find myself wanting to re read- always looking for something brilliant that I might have not seen the first time around. Kudos to you and this story! I'm now a devoted fan.
Wonderful story! I love reading it..you have great writing skills & the story line is something I have never read on any site it is very original and we'll thought out. Thank you for getting the new chapters out quickly I am always happy to see a new one almost right after I finish the last.. I like it better that way! Thank you for all the work u put into this story it's very much appreciated.
Suki~B (Chapter 8) - Sun 17 Nov 2013
I am deeply impressed by the constancy of the story. I can not wait for more.
Pfairy (Chapter 7) - Sun 17 Nov 2013
I have no words to express how amazing I find this story! The writing and the emotion that can be felt. I will be looking foward to the next installment! :)
Cindy (Chapter 7) - Sun 17 Nov 2013
Keep going! Such a tender moment between Sessoumaru and Kagome!
momo1o1 (Chapter 7) - Sat 16 Nov 2013
Oh boy! Looks like I’ve stumbled onto a new favorite story :3 this is soooo good so far can’t wait to read more
wow so goooood now to get that scum for making poeple sick
Come it, keep it coming.
Hello!
Let me just say first, I love your style of writing!! There are only a handful of writers on this site who I look up to because I think they're writing is amazing and offers something from which to learn. You've just been added to this list.
As far as your story goes, I'm loving that too!! This is such a belieavable plot and you've written it so well that you've kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading it!!
I seriously can't wait to read more, so update soon!!!
Fei
rose (Chapter 6) - Wed 13 Nov 2013
next chapter please
Cindy (Chapter 5) - Wed 13 Nov 2013
It's getting so good! Keep it up!
Suka25 (Chapter 5) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
dumbass, arrogant, stubborn.......Taiyoukai! I knew this was gonna happen!
Suki~B (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
This whole concept is stunning and the follow through is equally so. I can't wait for updates!
I like your story thus far. Keep it coming!!! :D
Suka25 (Chapter 4) - Mon 11 Nov 2013
Go kagome!!!!!
Both chapters are great, keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 3) - Mon 11 Nov 2013
next chapter please
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Nov 2013
This is excellent!!! I'm totally hooked. This story does give you a window on how it was like to live in that time period with the threat of plague or small pox....and to work that in as what may have happened to the Yokai as a race....brillant!!!!
More Please!!!!!
Ulam (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Nov 2013
Beautifully written! Keep up the good! I can't wait to read more :}.
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