Excellent chapter; excellent story. Thanks so much and Happy Thanksgiving.
Wow, what a fantastic start! Very interesting concept for a story: a sickness that threatens demons and humans alike. Your character portrayals are spot-on, and I really like the friendship between Kagome and Inuyasha. In my mind, this is how I saw things playing out for the two of them at the end of the series -- together not romatically, but platonically. I also think it's cool how Kagome is using knowledge of modern medicine to help out as best she can while being conscious of how doing so could impact both the past and the future. I'm looking forward to reading the rest over the next week or so -- I wish I could read it all NOW, but I've got this stupid term paper to write... Anyway, great job! :)
I absolutely love your writing!!! You have a wonderful way of spinning a tale! Please update soon!!! And keep up the amazing work!!
Suka25 (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 Nov 2013
awe they cant resproduce!
Suka25 (Chapter 13) - Sun 24 Nov 2013
Hahaha you got that right Sesshoumaru-sama! Cant wait for more....
I like this story...it is well done...I can't wait for more...it is cool that Kagome was able to save Sesshomaru...it will be interesting to see what happens next.
keep up the good work and update soon... :]
lindsay (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Nov 2013
I have to say, I can't express how happy I get whenever you update this story. Keep it up! :D :D
rose (Chapter 11) - Wed 20 Nov 2013
next chapter please
Melinda (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Nov 2013
Im not usually into gore, but this sets up the serrious bad-ness of the bad guys, good job and thanks for keeping it to less than a page. I liked this chapter a lot and can't wait to find out how this very engrosing story wraps up.
Do you have the ending already written or are you only done to a certain point?
Just want to say what a wonderful story. Love the characters and the plot is so deep. Very well written and runs smoothly. Update soon!!!
give inuyasha a break. it makes me sad to see that he is left out. how long are you going to let that scum kill people
pfff ahahahahah x'D
Poor 'gome.
Glad the chappy went into a happier side by the end, had to scrub the gore my mind made up from that 1st part. :P
Suka25 (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Nov 2013
hahahahaha good one
Melinda (Chapter 10) - Tue 19 Nov 2013
WOW! I read the original on Fanfiction a while back and it was pretty good, but this new edit is blowing my socks off! I think it's in my top ten list of favorites, and that's saying something because I've read, no exadgeration, thousands of stories.
Please continue weaving this new tale, I'm obsesively checking for updates and day dreaming about this story might lead. Thank you for putting the hard work needed into your writing that takes it from enjoyble, to incredible.
You have no idea how much I'm enjoying this story, and knowing that you have other chapters posted somewhere else is killing me xD But I will be a good girl and wait for the revised chappies QQ Even if it gives me an ulcer...
Update soon!~
I read this story on fanfiction and really liked it but have not found any difference in this revision so far. Hoping for an update past chapter 22 soon.
momo1o1 (Chapter 10) - Mon 18 Nov 2013
poor rock twins...always getting the brunt of the blame lol. this is such a GOOOOD story and so well written! I love you protrayal of sesshoumaru in this. keep it up! :3
This story deserves more recognition than it has gotten. :D
The plot is wonderful, the story is well-written and the way you portray the characters is fantastic! I love the plague/smallpox theme (I've been working on one myself!) and the way you present the sickness is cool.
Seriously, you are a great writer and your style of writing draws and captures your reader.
Please, continue being such an amazing writer!
OMG... There are so many things (good things) that I would like to say about this story; it's like WOW, so very well written, the plot is fantastic, everything makes sense. I mean, I just freaking LOVE the story! Keep up the good work, bc your are doing it great!!, and please PLEASE keep it comming!!!
Yay! I Love This Story. Don't Mind The Random Capitalization, I'm Not Sure Why My Phone Does It Haha. I Just Wanted To Let You Know This Is One Of My Favorite stories!
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