I'm reading this during class presentations which is horrible but I couldn't resist temptation.... I don't think I've ever cried so much reading a a story, hats off to you for being able to write this.
As you write this, I'm sort of drug along, halfway against my will, because for the first time in awhile, I'm scared to know what happens next. The last line especially frightens me, because it seems like it's sort of tempting fate, and usually that's not a good thing.
*holds on to optimism*
Wonderful chapter, beautifully written, and as always, can't wait for the next chapter.
MonMon (Chapter 4) - Tue 29 Nov 2011
This is such an emotional charged story but the attention to detail is amazing. Cancer is so devastating and how people work through all the emotions and situations that arise from it is a testament to the human strength.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
I don't know how you keep doing it but I am in all kinds of tears again! Anoter great chapter!!! Please let both Shippo and Rin live, Please!
luvcandy (Chapter 4) - Tue 29 Nov 2011
brought tears to my eyes, again!
thank you so much for sharing (:
TEARS! D: fixit!
omg i should so be sleeping but i'm all 0o0o0o over this ficcy!
Each chapter brings so many tears, and so many smiles. I know that writing this must be unbelievably hard, just because of the pain and suffering that is brought on by cancer. My heart has broken, and my prayers for those who are truly fighting this battle increased.
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. chapter was awesome. had me tearing up.
update soon <3
D: tears! so good!
oh your making me all sad! and happy at once!
Oh gods, I'm sniffling. I blew past choked up straight into sniffling and mistiness and just...
Your writing style is fantastic, and this story is beyond beautiful. It doesn't occur to many people what it's like to spend the holidays inside a hospital, or for the family of those who are in one, and you've done an amazing job of making us (or me at least) understand insofar as I can without having actually experienced it.
Beautiful story, and I can't wait to read more.
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