Man this was beautiful,sad, and just plain amazing!!! i was literally bawling!!! i love this story, you did an outstanding job.:)
Bah! What a great story. I am so glad it is based on a real story of a child living through such a horrible disease! I even cried a few times...Man...You did a wonderful job of conveying the pain and hope of all the characters.
awwww I luffs it <333333
it was so good love! <3
Tori (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Jan 2012
Oh my goodness, you are an amazing writer. I can tell so much feeling and effort has been put into this. I'm surrounded by discarded tissues right now. I'm so happy with the ending. If it had been anything else I think I may have gone into depression.. SUch a beautiful story. Heart-wrenching yet heart-warming. You are such an amazing writer. And I'm hope the real little boy Kyle is in good health and happy right now <3 You really high lighted what the families of sick children go through.
Rieu (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Jan 2012
I cried like a baby in this chapter. Seriously, Shippo and Rin ae too adorable. And that hair scene broke my heart </3
Oh jeebus. The update notification has been sitting in my inbox, and I've been writing and putting off reading it because I was genuinely afraid of Shippou dying.
Rin's speech was profound and utterly innocent, and made me sniffle. I'm glad I finished the story, and I'm glad you wrote it. Well written.
What a wonderful end to a truly amazing, beautiful, touching, heartfelt story. I am so glad that Kyle will be going home and will keep him in my thoughts, even as I hope for something similar to happen for my nephew. He still has years of treatment most likely, but there is ALWAYS hope - and that's the main thing I took from this story. No matter how dark it is, there is always hope. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us all!!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
A very touching story. I enjoyed it!
lashon (Chapter 7) - Sun 01 Jan 2012
aww!! you've left me speechless! i LOVE this! you are amazing!
Happy New Year!!! Thank you so much for writng such a beautiful story! One that truly touches the heart! I'm so very happy to hear that little Kyle is cancer free and it going home!! 2012 is already looking like a wonderful new year just for that fact alone!
Miyukiyama (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
New Year's Eve and I'm crying like a child right now. This story is beautiful and thank you for writing it.
Phoenix89 (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
Absolutely beautiful <3 the story hit close to home for me and it is wonderful to hear about Kyle. May he live a long and happy life :D
TruGemini (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
Such a beautiful ending C!!! And blessings and love to Kyle for being a brave little soldier and fighting his way through! Thank you for reminding us that there are more important things to think on during the season.
MonMon (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
what a wonderful way to end this beautiful and heart wrenching story! I'm so happy that Kyle is getting a second chance at life xoxo
This was a beautiful story. Hehe I cried though the whole thing. I'm happy the family this was based off of are doing well now.
rss (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
Loved your story! it was truely beautiful... :) Happy new year!
gah i so love this fic!
Wow! I really enjoyed this story and ended it with tears in my eyes. Then to read your author's note about Kyle. All I can say is just...wow. God bless little Kyle, his family, and all the people who take care of sick kids like him so they can get better and get on with their lives. Thank you for this lovely, lovely story.
BpAnImE (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2011
This was an amazing story!!! I'm sure everyone around me thinks I'm crazy cause it made me so emotional. Thanks for such a great story wish it didn't have to end!
That was an amazing story! Words can't describe how great it was and how amazingly powerful your words were lady!
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