| Chapter 11, "A Night of Forgiveness" was hot! That was some good writing.
| Sweeet! I hope Kagome give Sesshomaru a chance... He's already falling...
| Stupid Inuyasha! SitSitSitSitSit!
| Now THAT was drama. Great writing!
| Lonely Lark is an amazing author. Having her as your beta is some kind of honor! But you are pretty amazing yourself, so I think it's an honor you are very much deserving of. This was another great, and very vivid, chapter. You have a way with words, and the plot is very original.
| I don't know how I missed out on reading this story for so long, but when that happens with a really good fanfic, I get the delight of reading many chapters all at once. I have only read chapter one, and I can tell this is going to be one of the really, really good ones! You are right on canon. I enjoy reading canon stories so much, they are my first love in the world of fan fiction! And the way you phrase things, and your characterization, are colorful and true to the original works. I look forward to a great day spent reading this story!
L-desu (Chapter 12) - Thu 20 Aug 2009
unworthy one indeed.... ::SMACK:: how could you say that about yourself?!?!?!?! although the chapter was short, it had a lot of details in it where i had to reread it again just to grasp what was going on. the plot thickens... i know all too well what real life can do to a writer's creativity, so my utmost sympathies to you with whatever you're going through. take care!
| This is a very twisted story, though very original and cunning. I love your style of writing and the way you are stitching this story together :)
hopuchan (Chapter 7) - Thu 20 Aug 2009
| i love this story so far. but there's a little mistake here. sesshomaru wouldn't call kagome "oneesan" because that means big sister. she calls him "oniisan" which means big brother. he should call her "imoutosan" or "imoutonchan" or just "imouto" as that means little sister.
| YAY! You update! *do the happy dance*
*grin* I really love your story.
I must admit, I'm a little nervous about one thing you put in this chapter:
"and couldn't help noticing the minute frown marring his brow.
Loneliness was always hard for pack creatures such as dogs, and even such a stubborn being as Sesshomaru couldn't escape what he was."
I fear to know what you meant. But maybe, and I hope, I'm reading too much in this. He won't push her away now, right? just because she is human and will die before him? I really really hope not! Silly me, must have imagine things! :P
well, good chapter! I was a little confuse at the beginning but after I understood so it was good! :D Can't wait to read more!
please, update soon!!!
myria (Chapter 11) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
| THIS STORY IS HOTTER THEN A FIRECRACKER AND THE LAST CHAPTER AFTER WHAT HAPPEN BETWEEN THEM WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND INUYASHA DON'T DESERVE HER SO WHAT TAKING SO LONG TO UPDATE IT'S BEEN A WHILE HOPE TO HERE FROM YOU SOON CAN'T WAIT.
| Wow I missed your update, but glad I found it. The pact idea was cute and are you going to reveal some deeper meaning to the tie. Can't wait to see your next gift to we readers
Redly24 (Chapter 11) - Wed 08 Jul 2009
| I think your story is Absolutely Brilliant! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Alpine (Chapter 11) - Tue 07 Jul 2009
| Well... I really don't know what to say except... WOW... I read this whole story in one day. Your writing abilities are something you should NOT worry about.. I wish I had a little bit of your talent for writing. I really hope that was not the end of the story and I will be keeping my eye on this story to see how it proceeds.
Thanks for the great read
Hugs ^_^
Alpine
Rachael (Chapter 11) - Sun 14 Jun 2009
This is great. Although it's really hard waiting for the courteson bitches to die, but sigh~
I suppose I can endure it. You should post this on fanfiction.net too. Do you have an account there? Because If you did then I
could subscribe to your story and to you as an author so I'd know when it was updated and when you post new stories
so I wouldn't miss out. Honestly, I really like your story. If it's not too much trouble could you please tell me if you do decide
to upload on ff, or if you already have. My email is: CrAzYmOnKi1992@aol.com . Thanx, and please don't drop this...at
least not until after the courtesons are satisfactorily dead, maimed or...otherwise indisposed. Thanx! :3
rowdysgirl (Chapter 11) - Sat 30 May 2009
| I've read the whole thing in one go and it is brilliant.
blkntandogs (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 May 2009
| I love your story! I have spent and entire Saturday reading it, when I should have been out in the garden. You're story was a lot more fun than pulling weeds ;o) .I can not wait until you are able to update again!
As a side note I have a friend who has Shetland Sheepdogs, and they are a wonderful breed. I have Manchester Terriers myself, and one German Shepherd Dog.
Nenyanna (Chapter 11) - Sat 16 May 2009
Whoa....
I love finding new stories like this!
You have a talent!
please write more soon!
I miss this fic! I hope you're doing okay, I can't wait to see an update of this *nudge nudge* I'll be waiting (im)patiently XD
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