I really like how you're using the complete canon as a springboard for a new adventure, and making it cohesive with this couple. I'd imagine that a hard thing to do, but this chapter is very successful and has instantly grabbed my interest. I'm a little leery of Sesshoumaru's plan involving Kagome, but with your signature brand of evolving his character, I'm very eager to find out what it is. Great beginning!
I would really love to see more of this fic. I enjoyed the prologue immensely.
I really like it so far, can't wait for more! I enjoy the scenes, and the words that you use. It really helps to lay the picture straight.
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