good chapter. my only problem with it is that it didn't flow very well. you had kagome refuse to tell sango and then immediately after, with no given explanation she tells her EVERYTHING. the other thing that i think stopped the flow was that you didn't have enough BG stuff. i find that when i write, the lack of words seems daunting but i also know that when i write out everything (emotions thoughts actions etc.) i can eliminate what i dont think is necessary and end up with a good balance that gets what you need and want to, across.

 

Interesting idea though! lets see how you progress from here! ^_^

I love the story so far! I can't wait to read about Kagome going back to school and Sesshomaru's reaction on seeing her. Please continue soon..