this is a good, great, wonderful story and i love and like this story since i first started reading this story your a very good wonderful great author who wrote this wonderful good, and really great story.
Bobby (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Sep 2010
When are you going to write more of this story, PPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee
Bobby (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Wow...... just, Wow
zero1101 (Chapter 6) - Fri 03 Sep 2010
Kagome grow up some more, at least he wants to be in the boys life now. Don't get mad when he forgets you and goes to someone else which I'm sure you will, it's an okay chapter butinuyasha Kagome's making me mad by now.
Bobby (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Sep 2010
AWSOME, Please keep writing
zero1101 (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
G damnit woman! Just let him see the kid and be in his life! Why can't Kagome just let him, I mean yeah sure, he hurt HER not THEIR kid. Stupid woman
(not u, Kagome)
tiana (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
i rlly enjoy thiz story so far cant wait to c watz nxt update soon plz.
I LOVEEEE IT ! I wish she would hurry up and tell Inuyasha though ! I think he would love little Malakai :) CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE !
Missing me (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
Love the story!
alatera (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Aug 2010
This is a great story still from the first time I read it . Its very interesting and I cant wait to se what you do with it once it catches up to where it left off.
The whole time I read this story I'm on the edge of my seat. It's so good! Can't wait to see what happens next!
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Aug 2010
so...this is that other story then...I hope you continue it more then ff dot net had on for a while.
anyway...so...he thinks of it as a 'falling out' does that mean he doesn't think they broke up or not?
what does he see her as? like a potential mate? does Malakai look like a youkai even though he's technically a hanyou?
is Sesshomaru the heir to the Western Lands? because if so it appears she doesn't know...does she even know his and Inuyasha's family? hmmm...wonder when Sesshomaru will go too far and she brings in Inutashio.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
zero1101 (Chapter 3) - Wed 04 Aug 2010
She should've know he would find out, can't really keep a kid a secret forever kagome.
fluffytuffy18 (Chapter 3) - Wed 04 Aug 2010
I believe it's not wise to keep an eager reader on the edge of her seat !
tiana (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jul 2010
i rlly enjoyed thiz chpt keep up the nice work update soon plz
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jul 2010
is this a repost because I think a long time ago I read a similar one on ff dot net...if it is I definately was hoping it would be updated.
if it isn't I still loved the chappie and definately want to see an update.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
man is Fluffy a craddle robber
I like it!! its different but really good. Hope you update soon!
zero1101 (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Jul 2010
hey is this on Fanfiction too? I read it somewhere else
good job so far...i like to see how it is going to go...its keeping my interested.
good job and update soon
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