get the feeling that there is stil a little bit of dramz to be worked out between these two. BTW loved that your gutter marble ran away from you with with chapter, and I hope it happens again! You write love scenes beautifully - too many authors turn them into these over sexed, unrealistic, fantasies. Part of the beauty about how you write, is how real it all is - the good the bad the ugly. I Can't wait until the family dinner or for that matter to see how Kagome and Sesshomaru will resolve this one.
Lol, geeze reading both stories one after the other makes you realize how different the mood is huh? Lol. But I love them both!!
I must say this bath scene is completely different from the other one we got right? I don't want to be a hentai, but I think I prefer this one a lot more. Sesshomaru and Kagome are so cute because even after how they had been together, they still like are shy and blushing, and I think it's adorable. Plus they have plenty of times to get to know each other, so it's no biggie, lol.
And I adore Fluff + PWP, lmao. You did the greatest thing here my love.
I think it's cute in its own way how they got a better chance to hmm, explore each other this time around. And Sesshomary looks quite considerate, which reminds me, I'd like to be the one to owe him one this time, lmao. I wouldn't mind doing that. and I hope Kagome wrote it down because I have this feeling she's going to like what will happened, lmoa. Sesshomaru is not selfish.
You know even if it had ended with all that goodness, I wouldn't have minded it one bit. I mean, it was yummy, and it totally made me jealous. Once you get started on P, you can't stop can ya? Lmao. It's not a bad thing, I love it.
I'm sorry but never in a million years did I expect Sesshomaru's father to call. After everything we heard about him, he seemed to be a first class asshole. I mean leaving his son like that, and his mother, and having two families... I mean he was just wrong in every way. Im glad Kagome had that tone while talking to him, to let him know she was siding by her husband, and not some jerk who left something so precious behind. Although at first I was mad when she warmed up a bit to him, I understand why she did it.
Kagome is a good person, and I think she could hear the vibes of regrets. I don't think he's sorry enough, because if he was, he would be doing more, but I guess he does feel bad, and Kagome sensed it. Nonetheless, that turned out to be a big mess, and mistake. Of course Sesshomaru is going to feel betrayed, and now I'm nervous about how things will turn out.
Don't leave me hanging for two long!
Fluff is always welcomed...and I was delightfully surprised about Sess' father's conversation with Kagome. It seems that the guilt has taken a toll on him...question is, will Sess ever forgive him? He can't be too happy that his sweet wife is making nice with the old man, after everything he's told her. He prolly feels somewhat betrayed.
UGh! Write more...more....more...more!!!!! I love this story. It's so sweet and lovable :D..... Anyway, love the story,plot,characters, and all. Can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's reaction.
She gave him a smile that could probably light up the darkest nights, and though he revealed no signs of feeling so, Sesshoumaru felt that the waterfalls had never appeared more beautiful. - I loved this part! Ohh, I adore this steady surrender to their inevitable attraction. Even though they still will not admit it yet, the very subtle hints of romance are just - ah! *swoons* This was a very good chapter... It gives the reader some information about the background of our characters, while not giving it all away. Wonderful writing, once again! ^^
tiana (Chapter 26) - Mon 26 Jul 2010
lol thiz waz great although i waz dyin for a couple of dayz waitin but i wonder y sesshy waz lokin not so nice.
Lilith (Chapter 26) - Mon 26 Jul 2010
Naaahhhhh! D: I've been reading this entire story before I left reviews, and I just got done reading the last update, and may I say, THIS KICKS ASS. Sorry... But I had to say it!! I love the ideas put into this, the way the words flow together, and everytime a little fluff appears I squeal and have to smile. This is a wonderful story, and I would give it 2 thumbs up, even if it is still in the process of being worked on!
Until the next update, Riku~
RikayuTooLazyToSignIn (Chapter 26) - Mon 26 Jul 2010
Dun-Dun-Duuuuuuun!! I craving to know how that will play out! Sesshoumaru's father doesn't seem like such a bad person, but of course, you can never tell sometimes when it comes to phone calls. A person who usually can't hide through a lie can turn into such masters of deception when it comes to phone calls.
As for the bathroom scene, yes, it -was- yummeh! I love more the interaction between them afterwards. So playful with each other, just like a real couple would. Then again, they really ARE a real couple now! :D
Oh my, I missed so much, but the good thing about it is that I didn't have to wait for the updates, hahaha!!!
Chapter 24
Their first time was both funny and so endearing. To think he picked out a hardcore sex video for her to get the idea of how it's done. Not a good choice, Sesshoumaru. He surely wasn't thinking. But then when they finally just tried to do what they thought would please and feel good to each other, it was just so sweet. And who says the girl has to achieve orgasm to feel emotionally and physically fulfilled? Just the feeling of him moving inside is mindblowing. Feeling all the new sensations and feeling your body react to what he's doing is enough until you learn how and what it takes to get your body to orgasm. You did an acceptional job showing the reality of one's first time making love.
Chapter 25
This couldn't get anymore sweeter!!! Here they figure out they forgot the condom and there possibly could be a baby on the way and Sesshoumaru just puts all her fears and almost all of his to rest by saying they'd just make one happy family. It doesn't get any better than that...until the next chapter!!
Chapter 26
This has got to be one of the best sexy fluff stuff that I've ever read. Sesshoumaru just totally tips the scales for the most sweetest, gentlest, and understanding husbands ever. I have to wonder if he be like this if he wasn't neglected and rejected as a true Nishimiya and if he wasn't also a virgin? Aww, who really cares, anyway? Everyone wants a guy like this and if it'Sesshoumaru,WooHoo!
Now as for the conversation with Sessh's father... I think Kagome did quite well really. What was she supposed to do, hang up? I gather what angered him is that she called him , 'Father', ne? Kagome was taught to be respectful and since he is her father in law, the proper and respectful term she used is correct, even if Sesshoumaru believes otherwise.
I don't think their first real married fight is going to be a good one.... JEN
Ughhh okonomiyaki....Such a foul concoction of weird foods and occasionally ketchup.
I had that in Hiroshima. WORST experience EVER.
This is a great story though lol I love it alot.
O no Sesshouamaru heard the converstation. What will happen next? Tune in next time to find out what happens next on Happliy Ever After. Lol. Thanks for updating!!
Oh btw, love the fluff and the ending! lol I should have written about that earlier, but after reading other people's comments, I realized that I didn't write a review on the story. *laughs hesitantly* At least the bath was that believable for idiots like me who miss the inns' baths. lol Really excited and anxious to see what happens next! Perhaps Sesshoumaru is afraid that his father is going to monopolize all of Kagome's love instead of for him? Looking forward to your next chapter!
Wow... I can totally remember the baths at the inns! I didn't look at the picture first and imagined a regular japanese house bathroom, but it seemed too small with both of them in it. Then I looked at the picture and hit myself on the head as I should have realized that it was an inn bath. lol stupid me... hmm... now that I think about it, aside from a few homestays, I spent most of my bath times in the those kinds of baths. I kind of miss them and socializing with my friends in there. lol Thanks for bringing my memories of japan back to me! (^_^)
Saide (Chapter 26) - Sun 25 Jul 2010
Fluffy bath scene FTW! :D
My heart is racing right now, Sesshomaru is not looking good after hearing that phone call. >>;
>.< I am nervous this is another fight I swear it will be.
Good job darling. :D I'm waiting for the next one. >D
YAY!! FPWP rocks! that was a beautiful scene. and Omg I cant wait to read Sess's reaction...I hope they dont get in a fight!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 26) - Sun 25 Jul 2010
Well, Kagome sure was put on the spot, I think she handle the situation well. Sesshoumaru should be proud of her.
Kukuro (Chapter 26) - Sun 25 Jul 2010
Please update soon!! I wanna know what happens XD great fanfic, as always. And yeah, im not signed in on my account.. Internet is laggy so I can't.
Anyway, please continue!!
~Kukuro-chan♥
lil C (Chapter 24) - Sun 25 Jul 2010
LOLLLLLLL........... This chapter was so funny
lil C (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Jul 2010
1 Word. AMAZINGGGGGGGGG.................. keep it up
I love it LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTT.... plus i also love that you update and don't keep your readers waiting like forever AMAZINGGGGG.....
Well, you suprised me again by making Sesshomaru's father actually remorsful. We'll see if he truely means it when the family shows up for the dinner. I hope Kagome doesn't get into too much trouble with Sesshomaru over that phone call. I can't imagine that he is happy that she seems to be getting along with his father when he would rather never speak to him agian. I wonder if Kagome will be able to bridge the gap between them. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Khrystyne
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