Yay!! I'm so happy that I've finally get to read this chapter after all this time!! I soooooooooo love how Kagz told Sesshy's family off and glad how Kagz save all that built up anger on them!!! I swear Inu was acting like a huge bitch on the period ... no scratch that he acted worst then a female who's on there period. Omg and Inu's asshole of a mother ... three words: Mega Diva Bitch!!! Ooo and love how you describe Sesshy's eyes when he look at his wafie with all the respect she deserves. Oh and truly love how Kagz told Sesshy that they don't need to eat with likes of these people and walk away from the dinner hall. The one thing I wish was that Sesshy could have say at least something to back up Kagz. Please please update soon!!! I really really want to know what Sesshy going to say to Kagz about her rage rampage!! ^__________^
Giiiirl, you TOTALLY deserved all those awards you got for HEA! Congrats to you on those! What accomplishments!!
Wow, already the Nishimiya's are so rude. D=
OMG. How awful! Poor Sesshoumaru and Kagome (the fish) I hope they don't get fishy cancer from the cigarette ashes. That's just awful! *Bashes Inuyasha and Bankotsu on the head repeatedly*
Poor Sesshoumaru; being treated so badly for so long he's practically immune to it. Can we just kill everyone off and just live in Kagome and Sesshoumaru's La-La-Love land? lol. Pretty please? XDDD
Yeah! Go Sesshomaru! Show those dang buttheads your kickass culinary skills!
Jas, you're making me hungry with all the lovely description of the food Sesshoumaru is preparing.... lol.
Aww, his soft spot for Rin shows. How considerate and loving of Sesshoumaru to remove the fish bones from Rin's bowl.
Hehe. You used the word gooey. xDD
LOL!!! Sesshoumaru dropped his chopsticks!!! XDDDD But good going, Kiyomaru!! Give your oldest son some credit, finally! =D
Ouch. Someone should tape Inuyasha's mouth shut. Permanently. X____X;;
*Cheers* Go, Kagome, Go! Go, Kagome, Go! Show that Inuyasha what you're made of!!
That soup should have been hotter. -____-;; Maybe she should have burned Inuyasha's face off.
But I love how Kagome stood up for Sesshoumaru and I love how Sesshoumaru threw that 20% back in his father's face.
Maybe after Kagome's rant, the Nishimiya's will finally realize their behavior is ridiculous? .... On second thought, maybe not. But at least they can't pick on Sesshoumaru anymore!! Yaaaay!
Not Important (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Oh my goodness! Way to go Kags! And dayum, that was so intense. My heart was going Doki Doki Doki the entire time! Those icicles deserve what Kagome dished out anyways, arrogant jerkfaces!
P.S. I check this every day to see if it's been updated. ;)
Most Unlikely Angel (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
WooooHooooo!!!!!!!! GO KAGOME!!! thank you!! couldn't have said it better myself!! lol. Awsome chapter and congrats on the award, this story really did deserve it!! I look forwrd to the next chapter
Karen (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Miss Teak,
I wish to congratulate you on your win! Believe me you deserve it. Sometimes we can be our own worst critic.
Truly, enjoy this story. I have it bookmarked so I can check it first for an update. Really.
Your characterizations of the family are very insightful and beliveable.
Thanks for such a wonderful story. Hope to see more soon.
jgem (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
It's always awful when you have to deal with people who have no manners or sensitivity to other people's feelings.
I, myself, am in a situation similar to Sesshoumaru and everytime I am forced to be in the presence of those people I am torn between wanting to throw the "miso soup" at them or take the approach that I am above them and will ignore all that they say. It seems to me that a lot of what they say and do towards Sesshoumaru is designed to get some sort of rise out of him. It's like when the bully picks on certain kids; he likes the reaction he gets out of them.
All I can say, is what a miserable meal until Kagome livens things up. I also have to say, kudos to you Miss Teak for letting Kagome speak her mind in a way that doesn't seem to lower herself to their "name calling" level. Even when she is giving them a lecture, she isn't making it into a "you pick on Sesshoumaru" but rather she points out that as a clan, they don't have much respect for anyone. She is assertive, without being aggressive or "bitchy".
Personally, I don't see it as Sesshoumaru lacks a backbone, but rather because he still harbors some small desire to be accepted, he is not going to give them a reason to prevent it.
Nicely written.
Katrina (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Go Kagome! Finally someone need to give a piece of there mind about the family. I think after the family leaves maybe something happened between Inuyasha and Kikyou which case her to flip out and go crazy which could be a side to her that he never seen before in his life. Like in that one scene moving day in the movie called 'Why did I get married two?' and then maybe goes stays with Sesshomau and Kagome at the Inn and help out at the place. I think maybe another girl into a picture woudl be nice to add but I'm not sure if you remember the character Sara in the anime which I think she should be including in part of the story. After all you got to have girlfriends to talk to chat while working at the Inn.
I hate to see Inuyasha motehr as a bad person but in the real story she not a evil bitch but it's your story. I just hope that she not a bad buy and is not a bitch which also goes to Bankotsu he needs to change. It would be funny if he has a thing for Sara and is trying to win her attentions.
loveyaa (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
I was waiting for everything to hit the fan. I think that this chapter was handled well by Kagome and you. I quite enjoyed the way that this chapter and dinner turned out. I can't wait to see the aftermath now :)
Oooh...Somehow I had a feeling this was going to happen soon. Go Kagome!! lol I just wish she hadn't stopped throwing things at InuYasha. ^.^ It's always fun to throw food at people. :D Eagerly awaiting the next installment!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Wow...GO KAGOME, WELL DONE!! I hope you let Sesshoumaru kick Inuyasha's ass. As for Inuyasha's mother, shes the gold digging bitch. I hope some satisfaction comes Sesshoumaru's way in seeing that evil woman put in her place (very over due). As for not excepting the 20 percent, oh, I hope the father finds some way for Sesshoumaru and his family to have it, just to spite that dirty mouth Inuyasha. Kikyo should leave his nasty ass. Kagome should have said more, I wish Kagome would smack the step mother-in-law up side the head. Woe, I've not been this excited about a story since "Dreams". Great chapter....I hope more verbal action, along with some smacks up side the head are to come. ~L*
Lana (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
I don't know if i am supposed to make a account if i don't write any stories ^^; Anyways i just had to leave a review. MissTeak, you are one of the few writers out there that could make me go through so many emotions during one chapter. You have such a amazing talent that can draw readers in as if they were there sitting at the table with them! I don't usually review people's stories cause i always end up writing the same thing and feel embarrased about it. Regardless. thank you for updating this fantastic fanfic! I cant wait for the next chapter, to see the aftermath of Kagome's outburst! *Squeals*
hmm, I still wish that she could've sucker punch Inuyasha... or bitch-slapped his mom
OOOOhhh...I was waiting for that...so glad that someone finally bitch-slapped those shitheads!
Noacat (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Best.Chapter. Ever.
Madison (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Omg, I'm so excited that you updated this, and trust me, I need a little something to boost me back up. So thank you.
Why am I not surprise that they all decided to bitch and whine about everything? And honestly, I am so shocked at Kagome's self control. I would have expected her to blow up a long time ago, lol. But I guess she's doing it for not only the sake of the event, but for the poor Sesshomaru who always had to deal with such horrible people.
You sure know how to create hateable characters my dear!
Don't you hate rich people, or snobish mondaine people who think every day rules don't apply to them? Especially bastards who smoke, in such a building that should be preserve and not tainted with such a horrible scent. Honestly, you wonder how Sesshomaru is even related to these people. You know he gets his heart and manners from his mother, not these people. Disgusting.
Sorry, I couldn't help myself.
Personally, I want Kagome, to fight them, I want her to kick their butt and like teach them a lesson. I mean, gosh they are the ones who wants to come, but they are totally unable to show any form of respect for anyone, as if they were superior. And I'll agree with Kagome, the way Sesshomaru says nothing is uttermost annoying. I mean. Spine. Hello.
I understand he would wish for a family since he never had one, but that's just... He understand respect, I get it, but it's not like they give him any respect, so why is he so silent? And he's the sweetest thing, always trying to prove himself. Just like when he puts his soul into his food because all he wants is to be accepted.
He thinks the more efforts he puts, that one day they might like him. I think. And the thought of that alone, is just breaking my heart hun. The poor thing only ever wanted a family. Though I'm glad it's something he will have with Kagome in the future. Still, he wishes for acceptance coming from his own.
When everyone sat down for the dinner, and the conversation began, I was already fearing what was going to happen. Please tell me I'm wrong. Of course. Inuyasha gets all he wants because he's a freaking spoiled little bitch. Forgive my language, but I'm really not liking him in this. He's a first class a-hole. Hopefully someone shoves bread down his throat.
Oh for the love of -
I knew it.
See, I'm sure somewhere deep down Sesshomaru's dad intention were good. But this is fuc-freaking gonna make a scene. Oh dear. I mean come on, does he not know the people who surrounds him?
Freaking loud mouth prick Inuyasha. I knew someone was going to do a rant like that and oh my. SPLASH? *rolls on the floor*
K, I adore Kagome.
Her speech was perfect. I'm glad she finally allowed herself to explode so she could shove these people's pride down the throat, and choke them with it. However, I had wish that Sesshomaru would be the one to defend himself for once. Perhaps some other time though. AHAH. I'm glad someone agreed with Kagome.
And those a-holes. They think she wants money?
And Inuyasha... doesn't he understand Sesshomaru had to work hard for everything? His whole life?
Yes, Sesshomaru is lucky to have Kagome.
AND I'm glad Sesshomaru didn't want the stupid money!
Saide (Chapter 29) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! Kagome finally snaps and puts them in their right places. >8D Been waiting for this for a while. 8Db
YAY~!! I've been waiting for this~! XD
I was actually wondering what would happen since last chapter and THIS chapter didn't disappoint me~ (well, MissTeak never disappoints~ XD So plus points again!!)
Have you been an Okami in your past life? I've always wondered how you make things VERY detailed XD Even the food and the preparations are written accurately and I could just picture it in my mind~ It's like playing a movie in my thoughts XD That's one of the things I soooo love about your writing style~ Along with the pure emotions and realistic views~
OMG!! WAY TO GO KAGOME~!!! I'm giving you 10 BILLION points for that! XD I don't hate Yasha, Izayoi and Bankotsu, but the way they've been acting makes me want to tear their pictures to pieces and BURN evidences of their existence XP How could they say such things to Sesshoumaru and Kagome!? @_@ Well, some richie riches are indeed like that. Fighting even their own blood for inheritance. But to say mean things like that?Pure embodiment of greed! But I still love this chapter! It made me feel the tension and the intensity of the situation. If there was a STEAMING HOT soup anywhere near Kagome, it would be EPIC if it was what she threw at Yasha. XD *Evil thoughts, I welcome yoooouU~!*
I'm looking forward to the next chapters~ XD Loving it!
Yee-haw!
Go, Kagome, Go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now, I'm REALLY curious about what is going to happen between Sesshomaru's father and Izayoi, now that he has made an attempt to be fair...
'Kay. Read chapters 1-26 in one sitting, ending up staying up very late, lol.
I wanted to let you know, however, that you've done a brilliant job with this, and I've really enjoyed reading it so far! There are lots of little complexities that add to the flavour of the story (such as Hojo's snobbery).
One thing I REALLY appreciated seeing was awkward sex. Don't get me wrong, parts of it were a bit painful to read, but it's true that it doesn't always happen perfectly like we're used to reading and seeing. Kagome didn't have an orgasm the first time, and that was realistic! So I think you did a great job of portraying just how difficult sex for the first time really is! And for that I applaud you!
I think you're doing a lot of really neat things with this story, and I'm glad to see a different sort of Sesshoumaru and Kagome come together. :) The fish are hilarious. I loved the festival scene. Great job!
aj (Chapter 28) - Sun 29 Aug 2010
i love this story please keep updating it i can't wait to read more.
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