Hoping this isn't the last chapter... Really great story & hope you have more to come :-)
I absolutely love this story. The plot and characterizations are so beautifully executed. I feel like I can see everything that is happening like a canvas picture. I also love how original it is with the Geisha part. Amazing. I have always had a love for that part of Japanese culture.
The way you portray Sesshoumaru is very nicely done. I really enjoy how you make him have feelings under that mask of his. However, you definitely make us ladies swoon more for him now!
Kagome's character is so heartbreaking. I truly feel so sorry for her. She has been through so much and then to be sent back to see Sesshoumaru being cozy with Hasu .. I feel like most women would feel the same way, whether it was part of the plan or not.
While I do not like Hasu very much I feel sorry for the poor girl.. she was just a pawn in a terrible game. Hopefully all will be figured out for the characters soon! I just pray Kagome and Sesshoumaru get their happy ending together, they deserve it.
I know you are busy, as a nurse I completely understand. I just hope you won't forget this absolutely stunning piece of art you are putting together.. because this beautiful tale is more than a story, it is a finely crafted work of art, just like a kimono the highest of geisha wear. Take care!
Sarah (Chapter 60) - Tue 22 Jul 2014
I have been enthralled by this story. This story has captivated my heart in every way possible, it is one of the best stories I've read. The plot to his story is so strong that it is impossible to lose interest. At every second, there is something clenching your heart strings as you read on. It's mesmerizing story. I hope that you haven't abandoned this work of art. I would hate to see this piece that you have been working on go to waste. Even though it has been a long period of time since you have update this story. I ask you, please continue this passionate story with Sesshomaru and Kagome.
van (Chapter 60) - Sun 06 Jul 2014
Please updating if you have time :) really loooovvveeeee the storyy
UGH I WISH THIS WAS UPDATED MORE OFTEN... D:....ITS BEEN 4 YEARS Q~Q
Dear MissTeak, I love this story. I think the appeal lies in being able to create this atmosphere of the way of life then and there. I could always read it but could never reproduce the same effects... you are brilliant to a reader like me. I read this story long ago, and have only now found it again. I'm glad I have this opportunity to mention, how much I enjoyed it. I hope you will update soon enough.
Please Please update this it has been so long and is such a great story.
Eliona (Chapter 60) - Tue 03 Sep 2013
You never fail to astound with your amazing writing talents my dear, please update soon =)
Amber (Chapter 60) - Mon 08 Jul 2013
I am so enthralled! And so sad that i could not read more! Please, oh awesome writer, continue this fantastic story!
Amber (Chapter 56) - Mon 08 Jul 2013
Dear Miss Teak,
I am not a person that reviews often, so i hope you know how special your story is! It has great plot, character development, creative and artistic nuances. I truly love your story :) I hope your life is well outside the fandom, also.
If i may, there is one comment that i hope might help you in your future writing. The angst part of the story when Kagome becomes suicidal, while a very well written and in depth part, is also not blevieable due to the fact she had been so strong during the torture. And she had not actually been raped. It is hard to comprehend how weak minded she became, when she had not allowed herself to become broken mentally during the torture.
But! I do not say that because i am disappointed or anything of the sort with your writing! I think your are terrific and brilliant, and i only hope that you practice on constructive critisism so that, if it is your wish, to become a famous author. For i would greatly want to read any more stories you have to offer!
Stay Awesome,
Love Amber
Amber (Chapter 4) - Sun 07 Jul 2013
Love your brilliant writing! Keep going :)
xinyi (Chapter 60) - Fri 12 Apr 2013
Love the story! It's v skilfully written n am looking forward to your next update :)
I have such a bad habbit of reading a fanfic or even a book, and I always look down real quick to find out what happens, then glance back up to finish reading... >< I wish I wouldn't do that! I couldn't help myself though, I had to know whaat was gonna happen XD Love this story so far!
lovely. please write more. an incomplete story is like a puppy without a home. Love the story and teach it new tricks!
Samara (Chapter 60) - Sun 02 Dec 2012
wow, this story kept me up two nights in a row... this really isnt good because i have finals next week... eek... i can not wit for an update and some fluffyness between these two... you are doing a wonderful job... and from my count went to japan twice... oh how i wish i was in your shoes... did you go over with a study abroad or on your own?? i can not wait to go myself... my only thing is paying for it...well i am off to go cram... see you, keep up the great work!!!
Please continue. . :)
Melinda (Chapter 1) - Fri 31 Aug 2012
I have read litterally hundreds of other SessKag fictions, but this is may favorite hands down. I think once I read the ending I can die happy (I'm 27, so you prob have time to finish it lol). I have read wisteria twice and I'll read it again and again. The imagery is wonderful, the characters are so 3 dimentional. I'm a little sceptacle that Kagome would try to kill herself after an attempted rape and tortchure (she was kidnapped every-other episode in the anime, so she should be an old pro, right?), but didn't consider death when she realized she had betrayed the one she loves, but that's my personal opinion. The dark chapters are a little too dark for my taste, but to each their own. The romantic chapters have been some of the best I've read anywhere, and I want to tell you this story is moving and wonderful. Your story sucks me in and keeps me there!
Thank you for ALL the time and effort you've put into this -writting long fanfictions are really a labor of love to the thousands of us that enjoy them. I know I certainly have enjoyed yours.
This story's amazing and truly one of my favorites. It's been quite a while since an update though. Don't forget this story!!
Nyx (Chapter 60) - Mon 06 Aug 2012
I remember reading this a few months ago. I loved it. Any updates will be bear-hugged and be treasured for ever and ever.
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