Just a little disappointed. The story started off so unique and elegant.. and then slowly morphed into a predictable fanfic.
I'm convinced Kagome is bi-polar. So hot one moment and cold the next. She makes a firm decision then randomly changes her mind only to change her mind again. I'm getting whiplash over here. And if she truly wanted the nail in the coffin (as she believes it would be), she'd simply reveal her true identity. Not that that'd work, but she believes it would - and she'd be sparing his feelings as well. But I understand, it doesn't work with the narrative.
Regardless, I'm enjoying it, and will continue to read. I just hope Kagome becomes less... wishy-washy. Ah! But I'm loving your version of Sesshomaru. Some OOC on both Kagome and Sessh, but still an enjoyable read.
This is still one of the most amazing SessKags I have read. Sucks me in every time with such well written imagery, drama, poetry, angst, and romance. I know it's been a long time, and I would love to see the end of this. I hope the years have been kind to you and that you're doing well. Thanks for sharing.
Im still loving this story! I hope that you will come back and finish it. I wonder whats going to happen to Kagome. I hope that Sesshomaru can understand where she was coming from. But I completely understand why he would be hurt.
I found fan are for this stroy and immediately decided I needed to read it. So far i am soo in kove with this story
Just read all the way to chapter 60. Im enjoying the story but there have been a few inconsistencies, bit also, sesshoumaru constantly saying "this sesshoumaru... bit overused and it takes me right out of the story. Especially since it wasn't so constant from the beginning. Also, is this story active and to be updated soon or is it dead?
This story definitely took a different turn than I expected when kagome was kidnapped and was suicidal and depressed. Very well written, enjoyed every second. I hope to see an update on this :)
Dryft (Chapter 60) - Sat 24 Mar 2018
this story is simply sublime!!! I hope you continue it one day!!
Why did you abandon this?!?! It's a travesty that it was never finished - it's an amazing story!
Nile (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jun 2017
I went through and read this again. I love this fanfic. I hope to see this finished one day.
I have been reading this beautifully crafted story at work as though it were my religion. I have to say that I do NOT regret a single moment that I was supposed to be dedicating to the tasks at hand. I was so easily enamored by your writing style and the events of the fic that I just could not spare a single moment for my work which I ended up casting to the wayside. I really enjoyed the progression of the tale and strongly believe that it was well-paced, well-written and well researched. It was thorough without the fic being too overly detailed. The dialog wasn't forced and the fluidity was perfect! I'm glad you developed Kagome's character and included the angst because it made the entire situation more believable. I have to say that I was impressed. I am eagerly awaiting your return and continuation of this engrossing tale. I hope your real life is treating you well.
snow (Chapter 60) - Sat 24 Dec 2016
I haven't read this story in a very long time, I stumble across this story after so long. I do hope you continue this story at some point in time I would love to know the outcome of all of this and who set everything up! such a wonderful story can't just end like this with no finally?
Wonderful story. Left off at chapter 60, and I'm desiring to know what might happen to complete the fic. One of the chapters mentioned a lemon, yet it hasn't come up in the story so far. It has been a couple of years since this story had an update, and hopefully one day you'll finish it. I love the geisha concept for the entire background. Thank you for your fantastic writing style -- I can see the expressions and feel the emotions of the characters through your descriptions.
Abie (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Apr 2016
Was really enjoying this story, but it wasn't finished. Hopefully some day you'll come back and finish it!
Need more chapters!!!!!
nia (Chapter 60) - Fri 29 Jan 2016
It such an awasome story. hope it has some ending. It's been too long, wish you continued it. Love the story.
I really curious what would happen.
who was oka actually? is she a demon or human or may be a witch? is she some kind related with naraku? did she want the shikon no tama? did she have a wish like make a dead person come alive? or were there some else who wanted shikon no tama?
then after these oka problem finish. would the well still working? would kags go home in future? forced to the future? or would she stay with sess? I really want to read it, how you take the story till end.
Please finish this story. I read it before on A Single Spark, and on here. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are such a good author.
Koree (Chapter 60) - Tue 28 Apr 2015
Hmmmmmm I Think I Might Have Pieced The Puzzle Together Lol
Ankita (Chapter 60) - Mon 05 Jan 2015
Its beeennn so longgg .... I wish you'd update this awesome story T_T
Hoping this isn't the last chapter... Really great story & hope you have more to come :-)
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