AAAWWWW! That was beautiful! I wonder how he is gong to feel when he figures it out though.
You cannot leave it like that!! AHHH! I am supposed to be typing two papers as we speak and your story captured me and wouldn't let me go. I admire your ability to write geisha so well. I'm a history student (trying to get into a good grad school now) and one of my personal studies has been geisha. When I first saw your summary, I was skeptical to say the least, and you proved me wrong. Very well written and CORRECT! Not to mention well researched. Great job.
Please write more soon!
Lady
At seeing that last line I had a image of sess washing her make up off to see if he could stir up his memories. I really enjoy your story and I really wish I had more a grammer nazi in me so that I could give a more meaningful review
| I cannot believe that he stayed there all that time and even in the rain. But I understand that when he wants something he will do whatever it takes to attain it. He is a very patient man in this fic. I would have taken a hold of her and flown her some place more private to talk when I saw her the first time. Now, be a good girl and update the reveal before my nerves get the best of me. JEN
Awwwww! They are so sweet together ^-^ Oooo, when he finds out, I wonder how he'll take it???? Dun dun dun! Fabulous job Miss Teak; fabulous!
Giannix (Chapter 18) - Thu 29 Jan 2009
| OMG!!! i have watery eyes!! that was so sweet!! kagome realised her feelings towards sesshoumaru!! and he was so cute!! keep writing!!! =) update soon!!
miju (Chapter 17) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
| THANK-YOU
MUCH
for this lovely chappie. and the length. twas beautiful :)
but things are going so slow :( and i am kinda eager for sessho to demonstrate his manliness again, lol.
hope the update is soon and keep it upp =)
Ana (Chapter 17) - Mon 26 Jan 2009
| Really great work. I love this!!!!!! I can't wait for more. Please update soon!!!
I really din't find this a very happy chapter, unless you compare it with the last few ones, namely those in whih Hasu is being mean to Kagome and stuff. If she keeps that up there might be a cat-fight pretty soon. I'm laughing just thinking about it. Anyway I thought Kagome was really mean and stubborn in this chapter and I hope she snaps out of it before it's too late (although, come to think about it, Sesshomaru is in too deep already to change his mind).
I can't wait to see how it will turn out so please don't keep us waiting for too long.
Keep up the good work
Ana
Ikaru (Chapter 17) - Mon 26 Jan 2009
| Happy chapter??? What pray tell was happy about it?? i mean i was happy it was there, but still seemed kinda sad to me......i love this story and i'm rooting for a real happy situation soon.....and a horrible painful end for Hasu....ja ne!!
| OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I FINALLY FOUND YOU!!!!!!!! *sobs* I'm soooooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaaaaaaaay! *jumps for joy* You finally came back!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!! I love this story!!! ^_^ Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
I am so happy that you are continuing this story! I first read it on Single Spark before it (sniff) ended operations, and I have been waiting for you to update on Dokuga for a while. I was so excited when I saw Wisteria on the updates list, and the new chapters I just read certainly didn't disappoint!
Kagome is being understandably reluctant to interact with Sesshoumaru again, but she should know all about his persistence from earlier encounters with him - how many fights did he and Inuyasha have over the Tetsusaiga? LOL. Plus, she needs to realize that she doesn't owe Hasu anything anymore - Hasu doesn't respect the the sisterhood bond, IMO. She's just using the bond to control Kagome. Plus, does Kagome really want to expose Sesshoumaru to Hasu's obsessive nastiness?
Here's hoping that she will come to her senses soon! And here's extra hoping that there will be another update soon:)!
17- Happy chapter? Really, if that's your definition of a "happy chapter" I don't know if I can take something good going on. Goodness. Sesshoumaru looked like a kicked puppy, and I am hoping against hope that he doesn't say to hell with this before that third meeting comes about. On the other hand, I do like the portrayle of Kagome as an actress. Her determination to be 'adult' about the situation seemed to take a turn for the worse there at the end. I can see her confusion goes even deeper than just her Hasu/Fuji, Fuji/Kagome conflics. She has much to reconsile within herself; I wonder if Sesshoumaru, who seems to be having his own bisected personallity issues, will be a hindrence or a help when all of this comes to light. I appreciate the update.
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
anna (Chapter 17) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
| I love this story! I never expected it to be continued, but here it is. THis is aall so sad...i hope a happy ending is coming soon. Love your writing.
16- While I like hearing about the main characters, you've done a wonderful job with the secondary characters. This paragraph in particular stood out in my mind:
"Yanagi remained deathly silent, remembering Kagome's earlier reluctance to discuss the topic of Sesshoumaru. Hinagiku simply yawned again and looked clueless as to what was going on, but Kikyou and a few other juniors like Himawari looked almost incredulous. Kikyou looked around the table and sighed, before turning to face Kagome."
Between this example and the lovely reintroduction of Jaken earlier, its very obvious that each of your characters are very distinct and indvidual personalities. I am rather fond of Kikyou's determination and Himawari's expressions. As always,
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
15- ooh. I knew that Kagome had fallen head over heels, but Sesshoumaru? Hm. This is a fun development. I'm curious to see how far this goes, between the both of them, before one of them gets fed up and explodes. I love the mention of InuPapa rolling in his grave! This chapter pulled at my heartstrings a bit. Kagome running off in the last chapter was sad, but to see that Sess might not be so callous to the idea of furthering their assosication- That made Kags cry fest a little more heartbreaking.
14- HI! Here I go begging for you to post, and then it takes me weeks to actually read and review. Sorry about that. :D Oh my, who knew Hasu would be so insane?! I expected a bit of jelousy, but to actually beat a little sister? I was taken aback. I am going to quickly move on to the next chapter so that I can see what happens next. Thanks again for joining the site and
Thank you for sharing,
Kyuthe
Anamika (Chapter 17) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
| Well its not the glare thing, and neither will I throw stones at you. You may have enjoyed writing this fic. But this chapter really is very sad... I mean after all that loneliness stuff, it pains me greatly to see sess this way. I know what might have transpired in Kag's heart but still its not justice that you are providing to their 'relationship.' Nonetheless, this chapter by far is well written and very well attended too, though sad and depressing but a good one as well... Update soon...
Zoku (Chapter 17) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
AHH!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!! Its been so long since I read it, and now I am compleatly captivated by it once more. I am glad to see you and your work back in my life.
Thanks so much for all your hard work!
No stones, but buckets full of LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!
Anamika (Chapter 6) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
| I liked the perks of this chapter. Still this world is so vast, and nature is far more mysterious and exquisite than we give it credit for. Its a wonderful melody that we might not be able to hear is completely for our life is short compared to it...
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