Busted! Kagome unwittingly outed herself with her doodling. The two of them have falllen in love with each other--with a side tey rearely let another see. An it is just that--they have fallen in love with each other. Seshoumaru loves Kagome--and all that she truly is. Funny how he loves her packaged differently.
A song I an particularly enamoured with, fits right in with this fiction: 'Put Your Arms Around Me' by the group 'Texas'. It was in the move EverAfter. The movie and this fic share a similar theme so the song resonnated with me as I have been reading along.
Put Your Arms Around Me (McElhorn, Spiteri, Hodgens, Stewart)
Are you ready maybe are you willing to run Are you ready to let yourself drown Are you holding your breath Are you ready or not Are you ready maybe do you long to confess Do you feel that you're already numb Are you sure of yourself Would you lie if you're not
You tire me out don't want to let that happen A secret scream so loud why did you let that happen So put your arms around me You let me believe that you were someone else Cause only time can take you So let me believe that I am someone else
Maybe are you ready to break Do you think that I push you too far Would you open yourself Are you reckless or not
You tire me out don't want to let that happen A secret scream so loud why did you let that happen So put your arms around me You let me believe that you were someone else Cause only time can take you So let me believe that I am someone else
So put your arms around me So put your arms around me Make me believe Take me, take me somewhere, somewhere Let me believe Cause only time can take you so stop
Good tension in the chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
BW
My dear MissTeak!! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I'm honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can't wait to read the next installment - the angst is KILLING me! I have waited long for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Fuji's true identity! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
My dear MissTeak!! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I’m honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can’t wait to read the next installment – the angst is KILLING me! I have waited for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Kagome for so long! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
My dear MissTeak!! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I’m honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can’t wait to read the next installment – the angst is KILLING me! I have waited for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Kagome for so long! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
My dear MissTeak! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I’m honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can’t wait to read the next installment – the angst is KILLING me! I have waited for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Kagome for so long! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
My dear MissTeak!! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I’m honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can’t wait to read the next installment – the angst is KILLING me! I have waited for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Kagome for so long! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
My dear MissTeak!! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I’m honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can’t wait to read the next installment – the angst is KILLING me! I have waited for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Kagome for so long! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
My dear MissTeak!! I was ecstatic to see the emails saying you updated Wisteria. I’m honestly glad I had a lot of chapters to catch up to on reading because I kept wanting more and more every single one I read. Your descriptive and constantly flowing writing style never ceases to amaze me. MT, you and your stories are WONDERFUL. Can’t wait to read the next installment – the angst is KILLING me! I have waited for the moment that Sesshomaru finds out about Kagome for so long! Missed you and Wisteria ridiculously much~
RayRay (Chapter 33) - Thu 24 Dec 2009
OMG YAY HE KNOWS NOW *celebrates* This review will be short but sweet since I was reading quickly on this cold Christmas Eve afternoon! I loved it and omg she's so sneaky, of course it will catch up to her eventually and BOY did it catch up to her! Sesshomaru, understandably, appears so upset! I would be too, and now it's time for some confessions :P anyways love it, Merry Christmas, and I can't wait to read more! <3
Oh noes! Has he figured it out? This is going to be bad. I hope it their relationship can be salvaged. I hope he hears her out. *wrings hands* Great chapter. ^_^
Dum dum dum, I hope Seshie isn't to mad.
wow this is an awesome story!!!!! But you left it at such a cliffy!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the awesome work!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to update reaaaallly soon !!!!!!! The suspense is KILLING me !!!! How is Sesshoumaru going to act now ? Is he going to confront her ? Will he even tell her he figured her out ??? I HAVE TO KNOW !!!!!
Sprinks (Chapter 33) - Thu 24 Dec 2009
HOMG HOMG HOMG HOMG HOMG HOMG HOMG!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
so much suspense!
you write awesomely! cliffy cliffy!
this story is superbly written! i love this type of geisha stuff (Y)
i wonder what he'll do!
don't leave me waiting! I NEED THAT UPDATE NOW! :O!
XOXO
Now that is my definition of a cliffhanger!
Things are really happening fast now! I wasn't expecting that he might suspect a hex. That makes things more complicated, and more fraught with danger. But he recognized the name Kagome. Oooh, I am so curious about what will happen next, I hope you remain on your writing streak, so I can find out soon...
miwa03 (Chapter 33) - Thu 24 Dec 2009
Uwaa what will Sess do to Kags?? Suspense.. suspense.. >_<
Great job once again Teak-chan!
OMG, what a cliffhanger! I mean, I knew it had to happen soon and really, it's so much better that it happen now than after their relationship had gone to the next level, but still, it's just so sad! Now Sesshoumaru is heartbroken and he'll be furious and Kagome doesn't exactly have a great defense. Sure, she never started any of it with the intention to betray him, but that's how it ended up. She may have real feelings for him but he'll be in no mood to listen to her or believe her.
I see hard times ahead for the both of them, but especially poor Kagome. If only she'd been honest earlier! But she's still so young and still apt to make big, unwise decisions. I just hope she can figure a way out of this before things start to go really wrong on the shard front.
Goose (Chapter 33) - Thu 24 Dec 2009
AAAAAAAAAAARGH! *cries pitifully while franticly pressing the down button!!* You are so evil to leave it there! Please update really really soon....please :'( *cries*
Aaaargh!!!! Are you really going to leave us like this?
-Wails pitifully-
This is just too much!!
Ah, by the way, this chapter was excellent. As usual, Kagome is such a bad liar. I hope Sesshomaru will find in his heart enough love to understand she had no other choice. After all, she IS the Shikon Miko, and the Jewel is rightfully hers.
Joyeux Noël :)
Dewa mata!
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