This was an amazing read. So much going on. I'm so glad she is going to overcome her own doubts to help Inuyasha's and Kikyou's children. Hopefully she will be able to break her own blockage.
Oh please tell me there will be more chapters hate to see this story end....
Anyways, Kagome's right if she can help the kids she will be helping herself in the long run especially giving a piece of herself to her new nephews to help them along to transition to learning themselves as hanyo is something Kagome can do quite well. With Kikyo's kind words something that surprised Kagome made her see what she has done naturally without thought and always fought for those who were bullied or harmed in some way and now she would be helping them and others that may come along.
This was an amazing chapter I loved it.
Hope is beautiful.
You continue to amaze me with each chapter you post. It touches me deeply in ways that I cannot fully express. You inspire me to attempt writing again. Additionally, your kind heart is highlighted in how you addressed the person who stole ownership of your precious story. I'm so sorry that happened to you. May you continue forward with love, compassion, and health <3
Kathy (Chapter 30) - Wed 16 Aug 2023
You're an amazing writer and this chapter made me cry!!! I don't remember of what Truth Sesshomaru has. Was it that he's loved her for so long? I thought he already confessed that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I'm sorry about someone stealing your story. I am glad it got sorted out.
These chapters are always so beautifully written. Such a horrible burden for them all. This coming together will strengthen them. I'm so sorry to hear someone stole your story. But very glad you have found out and resolved that issue.
For your note Chiaztolite, I agree with you whole heartedly, and if they are reading these reviews I hope Karma finds you soon. Stop stealing other peoples hard loving work. Shame on you...
Oh man this was such a tough chapter to write I know that and I have to say you done it again and I am happy everyone has a little light shining within them letting the world know they have 'HOPE'. Thank you for writing a wonderful chapter.... I so love this story... :)
Wow this was a beautiful chapter! I can't possibly find fault for her actions now.
I think my biggest issue with a lot of stories like this is how the abused party doesn't allow the spouse to finally get the revenge on the abuser. She's annoying me with not speaking up for herself and not allowing Sesshomaru to deal with that monster.
God she made me so mad. If I were Chiyo, I would've banned Kagome for at least 50years for being so careless with my son! grrrrr
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Kathy (Chapter 29) - Sun 25 Jun 2023
What a sad chapter..i hope they can make it
Such a terrible burden to carry for all those years. Great back story. Thanks for updating
Oh man that was so tragic I knew that kikyo had a child before the boys and I thought it had died at birth or was stillborn. But my mind did not think to them having a little girl as bright as Kagome and Rin only to be locked down and burned alive while her father tried to save the kids only for a miko to chain him from saving them.... If only Inu Yasha took her away that day or even stayed with her he could have saved a lot of children and the teachers.... This was a sad tale and I understand why Kikyo does what she does, even though its still wrong and Inu Yasha should tell Sesshomaru what the human doctors are doing to yokai.... But I am happy Inu Yasha over came his grief with Kikyo's help it may have given the kids a new life living as a human but nothing is better than your real self... I love the story of Keiko I hope her story gets told to Sesshomaru and Kagome.
Thank you for the update, I loved it. I hope you don't end the story just yet, I would love to see a few things fallow through and a brighter future for yokai.
Good to see him back!
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