Hi! Well I love reading this story. As I am rereading this chatper I noticed an issue you may want to correct.
“That’s really responsible of you Rin, I’m sure your dads’ proud of you. Oh! Sorry to be rude, my name’s Kagome by the way, and you are?”
“It’s Rin… Uhmm.. Thanks for the cinnamon buns yesterday, dad said he got it from you. They were really good.” Rin flashed her a small smile but it seemed to Kagome that the smile was a bit forced.
'Kagome' calls her by her name, then asks for her name.
But again, I am loving the story plot as it continues to grow. It will be great to see how Kagome recieves Sesshomaru's mother.
Caera (Chapter 20) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Great chqpter. Thank you for the update.
Mona (Chapter 20) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Nice!!!
Looking forward to an update.
Let the fun begin.
Haven (Chapter 20) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Kagome meets Sesshomaru's mom? I wanna read that!
I had just got done reading this story when I got the email saying that it had been updated! Lol. Anyway I like it so please don't abandoned it. Please update soon!
*squee* *glomp*
Inuyasha came in and was perfect!!! Loved!
Poor sassy jealous much great chapter looking forward to next one.
Saiya (Chapter 19) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Hahahahaha Poor Fluffy so Jellen.
Debra (Chapter 19) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Oh, Poor InuYasha! He his going to have to really watch his step with Sesshoumaru. He didn't even like that he knew Kagome, he really didn't like him touching her. I bet InuYasha isn't even that bad with his own mate. I see him as protective, but I see Sesshoumaru on a whole other level. I guess since he is such an Alpha.
Hope you update soon!
Biru (Chapter 19) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Of course brash Inuyasha rushes in. I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru decides to put him in his place! This is gonna be good (x
Pamela (Chapter 19) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
Haha someone's jealous:) and the language goodness Inuyasha. I loved the rolled up newspaper and later the spoon. The fact that he was trying to control his tongue was hilarious. kagome's good for Sess, she knew exactly how to calm him down. Nice chapter:)
Awesome chapter! I totally love it and I am glad that we are not going to have any worries about a love triangle here. I'm glad you kept Inuyasha simply as her best friend. :) I wonder what Sesshoumaru's mother wants..that woman can't be up to any good. And boy I just love this badass Kagome LOL. :D
Haven (Chapter 19) - Tue 13 Oct 2015
I loved how she said 'my children'.
Oh my gosh! I am loving this story this far, AND you update so quickly! I'm excited!!!!
Eva (Chapter 18) - Mon 12 Oct 2015
Inuyasha has definitelystepped in it. Familial bliss has been shattered. I don't know which one he's going to get it from worse.
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