Reviews for Overtime by sam

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Kanda (Chapter 24) - Fri 11 Aug 2017

welp. badass kagome has come to the surface. watch out, ryuugamine. what does that name mean anyway? also, good story. a little fast-paced but eh. i got used to it. there was also the fact that you seem to have a lot of knowledge of things. do you work in an office or something or did you do a lot of research. love the idea of kagome becoming a shrine god. i thought it was cute how she wanted to give all the little things to the people who asked. except fer hojo, ofc, lol. anyway, hope you update soon and that life is treating you well. :)


Katrina Kee (Chapter 24) - Sat 20 Feb 2016

Uh oh!!! It's not nice to fool with Kami Kagome, Ryuugamines!!! You are going to get a spanking now!!!

I just hope that Kagome doesn't hurt you too much! Otherwise Sesshomaru won't have any fun when it comes to punishing you!!!

Can't wait for what comes next!!! Thanks!

 


Ashatan (Chapter 24) - Mon 17 Aug 2015

Thanks for the update! I can't wait for more! ! ! 

I cant even imagine the look of shock and horror on that guys face! Haha


Eva (Chapter 24) - Fri 14 Aug 2015

I almost feel sorry for him, almost.  I hope she leaves some for Sesshoumaru or he'll have to find some other way to work out his aggression. 


Eva (Chapter 23) - Fri 14 Aug 2015

Wow that's some powerful drug if she still can't use her reiki.


Kahdejus (Chapter 24) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

Yea you go Kagome show that pompous a$$ what's what.


Iyashimasu Fubuki (Chapter 23) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru is going to do to that advisor once he finds out his "woman", for all intents and purposes, has been kidnapped by him. Lol, Kami have mercy on his soul. And...maybe Kagome will have a sort of "power-up" and save herself. Although, I think him saving her is a crucial plot development. And the emotions this incident is sure to force upon him. 

 

All in all, Bravo. 

 

~Fitz


Mona (Chapter 23) - Wed 12 Aug 2015

I was so happy to see a update was posted and can't wait to read the next one, hopefully soon.


Bambudja (Chapter 22) - Fri 03 Jul 2015

Update whenever you can! This is a really great story!!!  


Reba Lynn (Chapter 22) - Tue 30 Jun 2015

Continue please!!!!!!


Ashatan (Chapter 21) - Sun 28 Jun 2015

I am thoroughly enjoying your story! I look forward to more! 


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 21) - Thu 25 Jun 2015

I am in love with your story. It is so deliciously well written. The plot takes the typical post Naraku era and turns it in to an epic.  I adore how you excuted Kagome's last journey through the well. I think it's a little funny that she is the shrine god of her family's shrine. I like how her relationship with Sesshomaru is developing; it takes turns that I didn't see coming, and I like that. All your characters are very three diemensional and flawed which makes things more interesting. It was a good choice to make Sesshomaru a man whom is akward with women in a unique way. Your potryal of Kagome as a confident young women is good. I love Shippo's meddling.  Your world building is amazing, the small details of lunch with co-workers and getting to work sell it. Keep up the awesome writing. I look forward to your next chapter, I can't wait.


sesshouscat (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

Again I'm spoiled XD

 

please update for me I'm sick in bed today and deserbe to be spoiled more

XD

 

LOL J/k

love your update I await your next one 


Diane Peter (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

I'm really enjoying this, I only noticed 3 mistakes, plain instead of plane when "They left their luggage on the plain" & you always use or instead of for & it's wrong throughout the whole fic, "It was already partially decorated <or> the festival".  You left out the t in to here, "She smiled o herself". 


Kahdejus (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

That was so great I can't wait for more. And lol poor Sesshomaru she's going to kill him, if she doesn't get what she wants. Please update date soon!!!!!!


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

Awwe I love it, I love when Sess is all non whorey :) lol. Can't stand it when he's the record holder for sex partners, this is a pleasant revelation. Thanks for the double chapters! 


sarah (Chapter 19) - Mon 15 Jun 2015

Did they ever find who the demon was that attacked sota ?


Mona (Chapter 18) - Fri 12 Jun 2015

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.  I wonder if the demon cornered Souta because he carries the same scent as Kagome?


Eva (Chapter 18) - Fri 12 Jun 2015

Oh lord is Jii-san going to be thrilled.


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 18) - Fri 12 Jun 2015

Hmm wonder who Sota turned to pink glittery bits... Hmmm


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