This is really good. You should do a sequel to it

Loved it. It would be cool if u continued the story. What happens when they get to the village? Why did sango and miroku abandon her? What will their lives be like at the palace?

You should make a sequel, you have a great beginning and could really grow it from there!! Good luck!

this was awesome!  would love a sequel to this or a story

The song went well with the story. I also liked how there wasn't some out of the blue confession of love or feelings, just mutual respect and wanting to help someone who deserves it, needs it.  I'd love to see another chapter maybe a sequel where sango and miroku come to apologize for there actions or maybe inuyasha tells them sesshomaru kidnapped her for some reason. They plan over the next two years to rescue her only to find a small budding relationship starting as lovers. 

Ja ne