Aaaah! Your story made me to like Rin! Usually I don't care about her, especially if she was potrayed to be a weak girl, with lots of rescue case, added in the plot just to shine Kagome's motherly nature... uh, no no... It's time to her to rescue someone, not just to be rescued! Go fighting girl! I love strong girl!
Wow that brought tears to my eyes! I am so excited for more!
I'm loving how 'in character' you are keeping Sesshoumaru. Like you said, weekday would he gain? But his curiosity is a weak point for him, and you are playing on it well. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Elspeth (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Apr 2015
Wow. Just wow. I hope you keep going. Your words made me sympathise with the characters. Keep up the wonderful work.
Thank you. It's nice to see a story where everyone doesn't automatically know the consequences of such a bond. Guess Sesshoumaru is going to have to be talked into how this will benefit him.
Can't wait to see where you take this.
you should let kagome suffer more for another 10 chapters or so XD
she needs to wake up. no bf likes it when their gf talks about their EX
Blommie8 (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Apr 2015
Oh my..it's so sad..
My eyes is teary..
I know it's hard to write. Sometimes maybe almost if this in my case make my head want to explode.
Because i know how hard it is so i really apreciate your hard word. And one thing,i hope the update wont long. Xoxo sorry.
Didie (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
*Snif..snif..* Congratulation for made me cry for just a shorter chapter! I won't say that he cruel or something, it's just so Sesshoumaru.. I am imagine he won't give it easily.. if not then we will read this story end in a mere least than 10 chapter...hehehe...
I love a story with the plot like this! I have begun to fed up with a plot that made Inuyasha looks like the bad one... oh please, he's not that bad! Just isn't as gorgeous as our Sesshoumaru..ohohohoho....
Good luck for this story! Can't wait to read more and more!
Eva (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
It would be a severely OOC Sesshoumaru if it were easy. I look forward to seeing how you resolve this conflict.
Saiya (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
Damn Live KAGOME LIVE> DARN YOU FLUFFY.
I dont see maru turning his back on such a powerful tool. Both kagome and the unborn would be a boon the his house. Thus the stain of inuyasha would be wiped away. Maru is a tactician in anything else. Always looking to supass his sire, in this he would take this into account.
Wish your chapters were longer :/....but please don't stop :)
Nah he'd of course try to fight it. His half brother and his own sire fell for a ningen woman and Sesshomaru would be extremely cautious not to even look like he was following the same path. But I am confident that he will do it in the end. He may not be very merciful, but his half brother was still a part of his pack and how that Inu is gone, Sesshomaru is responsible for the remaining gpack members. Also, Kagome saved Rin multiple times and while it's true, Sesshomaru saved Kagome too, it was mostly because again of the pack thing and aexondly, she was the only one to be able to get rid of the Shikon no Tama. Also there's this.....with Rin being in the village for so long, I'm sure Kagome protected Rin numerous times and maybe even Inu did as well. That could be considered a debt for Sesshomaru to pay off since Rin is his ward........whatever path your story takes, I cannot wait to read it!!!!!
M (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
How cruel Sesshoumaru, he kinda at least let her have some semblance of peace in believing he was Inuyasha. I'm curious, if he was to feed the baby his youki, would that make it much stronger? Or help turn it into a full youkai? Or into a miko youka? After all he and Kagome are very strong so sharing a bond would definitely make the baby powerful.
Blommie8 (Chapter 3) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
No fair! It's to short!
Make it longer please..
This is a great idea.
I wonder what happen when a mate died. Do they die together or one will survive. You know,it is really great. I hope you'll update soon.
Ohhhh my!! Three chapters in and I am in love with the story already <3 PLEASE continue is soon!
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Mon 27 Apr 2015
Ya Sesshomaru to Save the Day.
Very interesting so far! I hope you do continue... you are quite good at world-making, so I look forward to see what kind of youkai-centric world you invent this time.
I like it so far
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