wow I love Rin's relationship with Sesshoumaru; they have this understanding between them where they don't have to show over the top displays of affection to let the other know their feelings. And Inuyasha's death is very tragic. This is the first story I'm reading where he was killed while he was human.
OMG I love this chapter, it got me hooked already. I was hesitant to read because I know you are a fabulous after reading ADLC but I was scared you won't update so I never read this. I hope you don't leave for so long again. :) But back to the story, this was a very nice setup for the story to take off. You are a master at hookig people and keeping them on the edge of their seats at the end of every chapter.
That kiss scene!!!! :D
That was one awesome chapter! Good on you Miroku! Covered all the unspokens! He actually outmanouvered Sessh. I like that this Kagome has grown and learned to listen before she screams. Thanks for updating.
Eva (Chapter 8) - Wed 29 Mar 2017
What an injection of historical reality. I loved Miroku's part. Kagome would have blundered that badly in sheer ignorance.
Hope for more updates.
So excited about you continuing this one! I adore stories of Sesshoumaru taking in a widowed Kagome and the way you have their relationship is so realistic! We all know that while Sesshoumaru is honorable he would make it benefit him in some way
Natalia (Chapter 8) - Wed 29 Mar 2017
bravo!!! bravo miroku! a deep bow for him!he was briliant, you did well in portraying him as well as Sesshoumaru! a biig thank you for updating! i have such a hard day tommoro presenting my structured report and am so stressed so your fic helped me relax a lot! it gave me enrgy! thx! God bless you! sending you love and kisses! take care of yourself and have a nice week ahead of you.
p.s some love for your muse!
Natalia (Chapter 7) - Tue 28 Mar 2017
Wow! Yep i can see it the way! I feel inspired to write a widow fic myself but unfortunately don't have time... Another wonderful life! Good luck with everything! Take care! Sesshoumaru was well depicted and still in character! I can't wait to see him appreciating her for herself and plus it will take a long time for her to forget inuyasha... So this has the making of a slow burning deliciously romantic anghsy fic! I applaud you! You really have a way with words!
Please update soon!!
That was one amazing chapter! He finally got through to her! Initially Sessh will have his own agenda, but I have faith that Kagome will change his mind and his heart. Thanks for the update.
Yes looking forward to next chap.
Saiya (Chapter 7) - Wed 24 Feb 2016
So True!
Ree-san (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Feb 2016
Have you posted this before and are revamping? I feel like I've read this before, even some of the flow of the dialogue. Chapter 7 feels 'new' tho.
This is interesting, please update soon.
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