I am a little confused at Sesshomaru's thoughts though...
He wants her to be his, he counts her tears and wants her seperated from Inuyasha but he doesn't want Kagome to go to Kouga either. He wants her for himself.
So does he want her to just break Inuyasha? or does he truly want her for himself? When he thinks about breaking Kagome - is it so he can heal her heart and be with her?
I'm unusre where Sesshomaru is going with this XD
Oh and just to let you know..... When the characters are talking the " " is between words....Taking the last few sentences of your story, it should be like this:
"You must let go of him.", he said with full seriousness, ,,"Now!"
"What choice do I have, anyway?!", she asked with hiccups in between every word.
Sesshomaru walked closed to her and knelt down on one knee right in front of her. He reached out, took her chin gently in his claws and forced her to look him in the eyes.
"Make him regret his poorly made choice."
Your English is very good though! English is a difficult language to learn because we have so many meanings for just one word lol.....but I am enjoying your story and can't wait for more!
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Thu 02 Oct 2014
This, like the rest of your stories is indeed excellent!
Looking forward to more.
You're English is good! If it wasn't for the odd quotation marks/you mentioning it I wouldn't have thought English wasn't your first language. Can't wait for the next chapter
This is an awesome story. I'm quite excited for you to update next.
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 4 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. Good chapter, keep it coming
Ree-san (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Aug 2014
I was glad to see the update. Please don't let the story die. I'll be looking forward to the next update.
lattie (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Aug 2014
This is awesome! Please continue. ^_^
lattie (Chapter 3) - Mon 28 Apr 2014
Kagome! Why are you acting so evil?! Inuyasha is a jerk but don't let that moron taint you. And don't fall for Sesshy crap either.
Nice, keep it coming.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS COMPLETLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SQUEAL! !!!!!!!! THIS IS GONNA BE AMAZING!!!!!!!
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