This was amazing.  I hope you do share the second part.  I am curious as to what he is going to do to "fix" his mistake.

Wonderfully evocative.   So many horrid images and heart breaking moments until the shattering of consciousness.  Thank you so much for sharing.

i waited for your update with baited breath. I keep checking what time it might be in the United States, because it was close to midnight in my country, almost Wednesday already, when you said you would update on Tuesday. HAHAHA

As usual I love how your story comes along effortlessly and I love all the ways you never tell us what is happening, you keep showing it to us, and I feel like I have to peer closely to the words and the in-between to know what is going on. 

It was both funny and sad that Sesshomaru tried his best, travelling the country, in order to "cure" Kagome as she finally, finally loses her mind when he killed her baby. It just shows how fucked up his feelings for her really is and how much Sesshomaru truly loves her in his own horribly, terribly twisted way.

WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE NEXT? I need to know so I would not lose my mind :(( Can you please give a timeline to me? I would wait for the next update with so much enthuasiam, it's almost pitiful. 

I have two theories on what would happen next:

1. He revives her baby

2. He makes her a youkai

Sesshomaru with the Shikon no Tama is very dangerous. Is it fucked up of me to wish a happy ending for them anyway? A twisted "happy" ending, probably, but I still want want want want it. Sesshomaru and Kagome must belong together at the very end. :(((((((

OMG I AM SO EXCITED! UPDATE REALLY SOON PLEASE

Beautiful words! But I understood nothing from this chapter! Just confusing! She lost her mind? Closed up inside her Minda? What elixir did she drink? Transforming? And what does sesshoumaru regret? What does he wants? To be a god? But what about her? Does he regret killing the baby? Shatering her? He doesn't since he wants to do it again!

Thx for updating!

Oh my goodness, I want more of this.

Love your work!

Noooooo!!!! Sesshomaru what have you done!!!????

Now, here...i believe this is the most cruelest thing Sesshomaru have done in the entire chapter...i want you to know that this is the first dark (pure) fic I've ever read in my entire Sesskag life! 

And I totally agree with what Natalia had said...

But still you're awesome! Thank you!

I know this is a dark story which I like a lot, but I kinda want sessho to change a bit and start feeling for her. Waiting for the next chapter!! :D

You have an unique writing style and I am a fast  of your focus. I do not usually read dark but it happens. Only if it's logical and well written. I decided to give it a go because it's you. It's beautifully wicked. A. Dac? the imagery is strong. What really confused me is the situation with tense I gave. I don't understand what really happened.

1 he wanted to kill the baby but she died as well. 

2 he revived her but the baby should be revived as well no? Tenseiga nor him can choose to revive one and not the other. 

3 did he kill the baby again after reviving both? 

Wouldn't Tenseiga revive the baby? Ignoring the fact that Tenseiga wouldn't even work for such a twisted Sesshomaru because this Is not Canon Sesshomaru. We know compassion is needed so in my opinion Tenseiga wouldn't even work because he used it as a tool to kill one and not the other. His father would roll in his grave. The power of Tenseiga is totally twisted too? I am a fan of Canon facts that's why the twisting of such confuses Me. I mean no disrespect, but for me facts matter. To just make Sesshomaru bad without reason... Cause I don't see why he is so evil he certainly isn't so in manga especially at the end. But that is just my vision. I respect each others views. So I want to see deeper. Why? I ask like Kagome why? Animals like he is don't rape and abuse, they simply kill. Maul and other but here Sesshomaru is more human cruel than animal spirit that he is. It's again my opinion but it is stated that youkai are animal spirits, magical creatures but not biblical demons. So I am curious, why us he so cruel? Did he have a difficult childhood? Was he betrayed or something? Why use Kagome this way?

Thx for updating! Will be eagerly waiting for the next one! 

Happy new year! 

HOLY SHIT. It's so fucked up, I love it so much.

Omg this story is so unpredictable. I can't wait until your next update

Such Masterpiece! 

Such a precious gem yet fragile and rare in the dept's of the dark sea,

This story is full of emotions dark, angst yet beautiful!

Exquisite enough to destruct this poor Heart, too much to handle,

Your writing style is unique, every words is Breathtaking! Perfection!

You keep  me hanging for more. ..

Thus i believe this story is not yet finish!

Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!

Such Phenomenal writer you are...

Beyond happy to see another update!!!

i wonder though, at the ending you have planned for this story.

HOLY SHIT YOU'RE BACK OMG OMG OMG I WAS SO HAPPY TO FIND AN E-MAIL ALERT THAT YOU HAVE UPDATED!

What I love about the way you write is that you ALWAYS, ALWAYS SHOW, you never tell. I can almost feel your words crawling on my skin and my heart beat pounds like I am watching the story unfold right before my eyes. You are an amazing writer and I can only hope to have even half of your talent. Your storytelling is phenomenal and inspirational.

YOUR UPDATE IS A WELOME BELATED CHRISTMAS PRESENT!

I've reread this story so many times, i've lost count. everytime I hope for some miracle that another chapter will just pop up. And today it did! Why Wonderbug is choosing to torture me further but stating the story is finished but we are getting a chapter once a week, I do not know? But i'll take what i can get. This is one of my favorite stories and I looking forward to seeing how it all plays out!

Welcome back!!!!

This story is really one of my favorites. It's amazing how the author was able to show off the Sesshomaru you see from the outside and then have your brain move into viewing him the way Kagome does. The real him. I'm really hoping against hope that the author finishes the story. I'm waiting on baited breath to see how it all ends!

Wow just...Wow I hope you continue this

Awesome!

I have missed this story terribly and am wondering mayhap, if you will grace us with a new chapter soon. 

When will you update? HUHUHU

PLEASE tell me there will be more of this