OOoooo that was soo creepy, i give you props for coming up with all of this. Really amazing.

I really love the ending of this chapter. Sure its morbid, but it seem poetic to me.

I am highly curious about Sesshomaru's wish. Kagome shouldn't have fell from that cliff, I bet the consequences once Sesshomaru catches her would probably be painful.

I can't wait for your next update! :)

 So far this dark fiction is looking good. I find it very hard and rare to read good dark themed Sess/Kag fan fiction. Sometime Iy fans have to remember that before he becomes an anti-hero later on in the series he still has a semi villainous steak within him.

This was before Rin came along and ever after she did into his life. Good work I look forward to read the next chapter ASAP.

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy

HEY! What are you doing?! That's not friggin fair! HEY! YOU! Yes you! Mean! I don't know if Sesshoumaru will rescue her, or if he wished her to be immortal so that she can't die from even such a great fall. Of course, there is the possibility that he would revive her even if she was a bloody mess at the bottom of this cliff. I don't care, I DON'T CARE what you write, just write it woman!

Psssht. Let Sesshoumaru's gonna let her die. Nice try Kags.

Next chapter please? ;) No like seriously, right now. NOW.

I hope Sesshoumaru's wish isnt that Kagome...loves him. Ooooh that would be horrible lol!

ohhh, I'm intrigued. what was Sesshoumaru's wish

Oh wow. My heart... it's achiiiiiiiiing. That shippo part? You might be going to hell. It's okay, I've got a seat reserved right next to you. T.T

Update soon! I need more!

What a creepy nightmare! I really feel bad for her, I want her friends to be alive D: This is so dark that it is even dark to me, but I love it all the same! I can't wait! I really can't!

You hear that? I CAN'T

WAIT

As in physically unable. Get to typing, woman! XD

next chapter please

OH MY LORD! This is gonna be good. I really can't wait. That last line was seriously devastating. Shame on you! ;) Just kidding, I loved it.

That sounded bad, I dont love dead Inuyasha. I do, however, love dark Sesshoumaru. So dark. So mean. So...Sesshoumaru. Mmmm...  I'm not sure if my heart can wrap around the idea that there is absolutely no goodness in him. But I will try, because you have a great talent and I HAVE to read it. I look forward to the next chapter!

I really enjoyed that crow part. It really jumped out of me lol. Anyways I can't wait for our next update!

Wow. It's so strange to see Sesshoumaru in such a cold light!

I am enjoying this...Yes give me more!!

next chapter please

Updates so FAST! OMG YOU ARE AWESOME! So dark, so creepy, so utterly detestable! It is beautiful, thank you for the chapter. Honestly this is darker than I expected, and from the "dark" stories I've read, I find this refreshing. Go you! Do not stop! Do not slow down! Do not hesitate! I am literally TOO excited for the next chapter to sit still!!!!

Hot DAMN! CHICKA! You write some crazy stuff! I love you!!!! Really! I REALLY love you!!!

The chapter got my full attention, I can't wait till chapter 2. I wonder what Sesshomaru wished for.  

Omg, that was a very interesting start! However, I think it is a little weird reading this in present-tense, but you stayed true to it and didn't change tenses. It was easy to read as well. Anyways, I can't wait to see where you take this, I'm super excited lol.

WOW!!!!!!..... I really like.  Looking forward to more.