This one-shot story is exceptional and I keep coming back to it.
I really like your take on time-travel. The past, present and future are complexly interlinked and the eventual outcomes are fixed.
Theres no true ending and beginning in this piece with the way you have written it. Utterly commendable and crafty !
As a reader I am inclined to think past Sesshomaru felt drawn towards Kagome for some time but has not pursued her because of Kagome's
feelings for Inuyasha ?
The real mystery is future Sesshomaru's intention which is not mentioned but indicated as the story develops.
I like to think future Sesshomaru manages to confuse Kagome into playing a game that never began until she discovered him in the future as her landlord. He practically tells her how to approach his old self, get his attention while claiming he cannot tell her everything that was 'said' then. This is the trap that she thinks she fell for except the potrait of that landscape she first sees in his office is a foregone conclusion.
I wish you would make a whole chapter fic on this and expand on it. I absolutely love re-reading this one-shot and want more. SO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS LEFT TO THE READERS IMAGINATION TO ANSWER AAAAH !!!
Carlyn (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Jun 2020
I truly love this one so much. It's heartwarming.
marisel (Chapter 1) - Mon 06 May 2019
Wow this is really good but I hate when the characters die even if is to a complies some end to the story. Really, really enjoyed it. What happened to south and yokai in general.???
This was interesting but I kinda wish there was more
Sabrina (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Apr 2016
Great story...loved it!
Raynell (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Aug 2015
This was absolutely wonderful. You're very talented. Please keep on writing; preferably SessKag ofc. Thanks for sharing your stories.
Wow another great and creative story, thank you. You are a very talented writer I can't wait to see your future updates on your other stories. I just love everything about this one chapter story.
Such a beautiful story. It seems though, that you enjoy killing Inuyasha.
This was an absolute delight to read. Your characterizations were flawless, especially in Sesshomaru's case because I believe this was as closest to the original as it can be - in my mind. I loved the slow pace of this piece, I believe it flowed better the way you chose to write it. The way they were drawn to one another was so simple yet intricate, felt seamless. Very well handled, cleverly written, and nicely timed. Also, I have to give you credit for your vast vocabulary. An excellent piece which I am now adding to my favorites. Thank you for writing it! :)
P.S. For shame, Inuyasha... (I don't dislike him, but I do consider him a weak character, especially for a male lead, more like a teenager with issues, really)
Aw this one was good too! I feel bad for Inuyasha to be so stuck..... great story though i wish we could have seen more of his feelings develop for her in the past though.
wow. . simple games but amazing outcomes. . thanks for your sharing!
I don't normally review stories, but for this one I had to. You sculpted an amazing story and, I'll be honest, I kept guessing the ending throughout the story, thinking it would be like every other. But the ENDING, you did an amazing job, I had to go back and rethink the story just a bit. Honestly, I felt kind of teary. Thank you for creating such a lovely, heartbreaking story.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
Perfection!
Marie (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
I enjoyed this read very much, sad but happy. It gave me a surreal feeling, I look forward to another of your stories
Luna C. (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
Omg I loved this!
Amazing! All of that in a (long) one shot! I'm thoroughly impressed!
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jan 2014
Different.... I really, really like this....
Lovely piece of work. I greatly enjoyed this!!!
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