I have come to the conclusion that this story, albeit good, is mostly filled with reactions. Cold looks, hide emotion, flicker, something in "" eyes thought, thought thought!! This is killing the tale, it gets quite redundant. Altogether I think there has been maybe one fight scene,2 kisses and a lot of thought, rinse repeat repeat, repeat and hidden facial expressions. When a tale tends to drone on some readers may lose interest or take a longer time reading (they return to the story less and less). I was surprised that I suddenly had the urge to fast forward or give up. I want to love this story, I got extremely emotional and attached to this tale. But reading this chp and seeing that it so close to ending I notice every just keeps repeating with different characters. Ive kinda grown tired of the story :'(
Screaming when inu transformed CUS I KNEW IT I KNEW HE HAD tO HAVE BEEN ABLE.
Crying at the loss of Inu's leg.
Sobbing when Niji was lost
Wailing at House of the New Moon
Nothing is making me happier than what you have done for Inuyasha's role. It makes me remember why I had loved him in the first place. And I have this weird pride for his abilities in war.
Usually Inu is set in bad light or seems like his normal self, but this growth is AMAZING and has me squealing like a nutcase everytime he does something brilliant or sneaky. LOVE THIS STORY
Are you kidding me? Sesshomaru would NEVER let someone take what was his. Anyone with sense would chase afyer cause its obvious she will get raped and tortured and maybe even killed just to hurt Sess so nope I refuse to see any logic behind this! Wait till spring? No way! I think maybe this story is more gore than anything. I try to avoid those so maybe a warning? Sigh I'm emotionally attached to this tale ???? :'(
The chapter with Kagome healing was a bit wordy and droned on.To be honest most of the story kinda drones on a bit. You might want to work on keeping somethings short and sweet. However it was quite enjoyable. This tale feels almost like one of the screen writers works I review and deal with. It is a good tale!
One of the best stories I have read here, this is beautiful! And the epilogue with Shippo and Hojo was just too perfect. Thank you so much, I hope you write many many more stories for us to enjoy.
Eva (Chapter 61) - Thu 24 Mar 2016
I really enjoyed the expanded epilogue. The end was so sweet. Shippo is one of my favorite characters. You've created a very rich detailed story that is one of my favorites. Thank You for sharing your muse.
Eve (Chapter 61) - Wed 23 Mar 2016
Amazing ending! Thank you so much for adding that last chapter!
Thank you for a wonderful journey and a great ending!
I am thrilled that it was completed and sad that it's over!
Alma (Chapter 61) - Mon 21 Mar 2016
I loved this story. You did a great job. I really liked the ending. Keep up the good work.
Yay for an epilouge! I was so excited to see the update. It definitely feels complete now. Thank you for the wonderful story, and I hope you keep writing you have an amazing talent.
Leaora (Chapter 61) - Sun 20 Mar 2016
This was a stellar follow up!!! Thank you so much!!! This is definitely one of my favorite fanfictions of all time! Now, I think
I'll reread it from the beginning.
Such a great story I'm thinking of reading it again.
Jean (Chapter 61) - Sat 19 Mar 2016
Thank you for the last chapter, it was just what was needed for wrap everything up! I love everything about this story and am sad that it is over. I can't wait to see if you have anything planned for the future. I hope you keep writing, you have an amazing talent!
I'm going to spare you and everyone else the theatrics and just say that I thought it couldn't get any better. Except that it did. Not sure if you're gonna do more, I certainly wouldn't object! But if you didn't, I would dare say this fucking has ended at the perfect place :)
That ending was wonderful and beautiful and I enjoyed it, thank you very much for an amazing story! Happy Easter!
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