So can I say that Kago is extremely rude again? Seriously. It's bordering on taking advantage of her position. Who is an "honored guest" but keeps insulting the host? This isn't the most self-righteois portrayal of Kago I've seen, but she really likes putting her foot in her mouth and judging before having all pertinent information. I would skip her parts of the story if they weren't important.
The story is still great, I'm just bitching.
ponpiri (Chapter 4) - Mon 08 May 2017
At least you point out that Kagome is rude. Most authors "allow" her to get away with breaking formality because compassion and friendliness is always correct way to hold oneself on their stories. I always wondered tho why she doesn't show manners so well in fanfics when in the manga and anime she was always correcting Inuyasha about his lack of manners.
This is is pretty good so far.
ponpiri (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 May 2017
Dang, pox? Wow. Kago would have to steal a lot of medication to cure that many people. The alternative I would have thought of was possibly using Sesshou's blood, but then I forgot his dokkatsu. I hope she doesn't die. We all know she will someday, but to die of an illness that young after having three chances at life would be tragic.
Marvelously epic fic. Horribly evil villians. Well rounded characterizations. Lots of steamy action. Especially liked the portrayal of Sesshoumaru's mother. Nice use of humor to tie up loose ends.
Lauren (Chapter 61) - Mon 13 Feb 2017
Ah! I loved this story so much. I'd read and reviewed it on Archive, but hadn't known that you uploaded an epilog on Dokuga. It didn't seem like it would, but this final chapter tied up all of the lose ends. Everything feels settled, and the bit of laughter dispersed helped cushion what could be a tedious and difficult shift, what with the several jumps in time and accounting for everyone. I liked that you make Eri distantly related to Sango and Miroku (and Kagome). She was the most mature one.
I hope you're still writing and that your new year is off to a great start.
Happy Valentine's Day!
~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl
I just loved this story. It was wonderful.
I do so love how you have written Inuyasha. I much prefer stories where Sesshomaru ackowledges his worth and where Inu himself is able to realise his potential. I only wished you hadnt killed Niji off. I ship Inu and her almost as hard as I do Sessh and Kag. :'(.
honestly Miroku in this Chapter is man to have
Sarah (Chapter 61) - Mon 05 Dec 2016
Grate story, I love it
Jenny (Chapter 61) - Thu 24 Nov 2016
Amazing story, even though I would have loved to read some more about Ko and her life in freedom!!!
Amazing! I loved each chapte, and couldn't wait to read the next one. Remarkable talent!!!
Nallely (Chapter 61) - Sun 16 Oct 2016
Wow!!!! I really love your story, it was really strong, cruel and beautiful. I hope that you will give me the permission to publish your story in fanfiction, translated to spanish. Please!!!!!!!
This was wonderful! One of the best stories I've read :)
The end. Im glad I came back and read the rest. Good story, a bit wordy but good.
Is it me or does it seem like Kagome is a little weak then strong in rare instances. Sess to. I guess its being saved for the final final battle but damn they always seem to be having a really hard time harder than the actual, orginal series itself. The next chapter gets better but wow my frustration at this is huge .
Okay so I started reading this when you started putting it up on Dokuga and then I stopped reading SessXKag fanfiction for a few years (I got caught up in Harry Potter and Dragon Age). I have just gone back and read everything and then the chapters that I didn't read because I wasn't there for them. And I am. just. so. happy. Like, SO happy! This fic was filled with so much intrigue, and drama, and romance that I was completely enamored. :) To put it simply, I freaking loved it.
sarah (Chapter 61) - Thu 12 May 2016
I could probably read three more books this! Amazing work, and I loved the epilogue! I was so hoping that Hojo would get his comeuppance :)
sarah (Chapter 35) - Thu 12 May 2016
OKAY I just want to say a few things:
1) the sex scene a few chapters ago was just written.... so well! a lot of times you just get like... you know, really outrageous, awkward sex scenes but the one you wrote was so hot and so funny! I just really appreciated it haha
2) I looooove love love the best-friend/uncle inuyasha angle, and you've written him incredibly well.
3) just, in general, this is SUCH a good story! the writing style is so vibrant and accessible; it really connects me to the characters and plot.
Anyway, I'm super thankful, bless u
OH and did I mention long. It was delightfully long. It took me several days to get through it. but thanks again.
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