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Glxydragon (Chapter 43) - Wed 23 Sep 2015

I can't wait for the next chapter.  Thank you for the update.


roberta. (Chapter 43) - Wed 23 Sep 2015

Wow this chap was just to good for words. I loved the easy kagome handled the situation. I just enjoyed each and every word thanks you.


Jennn (Chapter 43) - Wed 23 Sep 2015

Omg this was perfect!!!!!!!! In so in love with this chapter!!! I cannot wait till the next (:


Victoria (Chapter 43) - Wed 23 Sep 2015

Hi! I am so glad you updated early! I love following this story as it continues to grow. You skill with not only the story line you've created;  but with the characters themselves blows me away. I have a deep love for beautiful fanfiction and while I've read some really good stories over the years I have to tell you just how beautiful and inspiring this story is. It would have to be one of my favorites of all time! Just want you to continue to keep this up and doing what comes naturally because it is working :) God bless your amazing work 


laenfante (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

Utterly brilliant! I love the portrayal of an intelligent, brave, and loyal Kagome, and you have written her wonderfully. Thank you for another magnificent chapter. Bring the next one soon!


KAggie (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

This chapter. EPIC. That was just so amazing! I don't even have words right. Gosh, I just love this story!!!


Pamela (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

Wow! What a turn out and I loved that Kagome handled herself like a Lady of the West the subjugation and dormanting powers she used on Jun were perfect. I'm so glad Kento wasn't the traitor. I love this story!


Kay Jacobs (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

Amazing. Just Amazing. Thank you for the regular updates, I'm really looking forward to what will happen next. 


Zyren (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

SO GOOD! SOOOOOO GOOD!!!! I cheered out loud once I realized what was happening and that Kento wasn't the traitor. Loved the brutal punishment from Kagome too. And Inuyasha dealing with the ameonnas was quite entertaining as well. What was at extra sudden surge of power and control he had? Important? Can't wait for more. It's all so exciting! 


Marie (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

I think I'm in love! This chapter has so much depth  and character. Emotion action. The tantalizing feeling of awe! I thoroughly  enjoyed this chapter.  It is much a or appreciated. Thank you


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

WOW! You go Kagome! And that devious Sesshomaru....I was confident in the last chapter he suspected Jun but when he accured his secretary I worried there for a minute! I am so so grateful he knew all along it was Jun and he was helping his friend's name be cleared. So does this mean that Jun no longer has telepathic powers as well? I hope so!

Now the people of the West can see the power of the Shikon Miko. She wasn't just there as a bystander when Naraku was killed after all.


KEdakumi (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

Oooo... there are some things worse then death.  Can't wait to see what happens next.


mani16koinu (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

This chapter is sublime. I was on a rollercoaster the whole time. I KNEW Kento was too good to be the traitor, I KNEW it! And I could have sworn Jun disappeared some time ago or ran away or something because I expected some sketch business with him in the beginning but I didn't put too much stock in it until now. Oh man though, this whole ringu business was intense. I was gasping and shouting the whole chapter!

And let's not forget about Inuyasha! I still can't believe how much maturity you manage to have him exhibit without it being completely OOC. I'm continually impressed by everything you put into your writing. I'm so excited for the next chapter. Kagome was a bad a$$ mofo in this chapter (which i DID NOT expect) and I feel myself needing to see how much more she grows as you write her. So good, so good, I'm so hype!!!


DeathDagger (Chapter 43) - Tue 22 Sep 2015

Omg!!!! Favorite chapter so far!!! Brilliantly done!!!


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 42) - Thu 17 Sep 2015

Wow! So much going on in the house of the West! I am worried what the North will do to make Kagome willingly go to him. Cannot wait for more!


Ankita (Chapter 42) - Thu 17 Sep 2015

Hahah loved this chapter especially kago n kimi moments. ..its always fun to watch/read about kimi i just love your portrayal <3 although in anime and manga she didn't have much role i always thought /wished sessho's mother would be like the way you portrayed. ...


Pamela (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Sep 2015

Wonderfully written fanfic, couldn't stop from reading this all in one night:) your descriptives are spot on and I love the dynamic between all the characters. You are very talented! Can't wait to read more:)


chili (Chapter 42) - Tue 15 Sep 2015

This story is amazing!  I don't remember if I ever left a note, but I want to tell you how I've always been looking forward to your next update and enjoying the way your story progressed!  Slow and steady, and not a single plot detail left behind.  I absolutely love your wit and skill, for it takes a lot to create such devious characters!

A few minor comments, though.  I understand in a story, a lot of titles and such can be made up, but I can tell you're making an effort to have titles and such make sense given the location/language, so hence these comments.  It's too late to change, but just for reference :)

Mao = Devil king, used to describe the leader of demons and such.  As a result, Miko no Mao would end up being translated to "the demon/evil leader of miko/priestesses" which is a little different than what you intended I think.  Miko of the demon king should be Mao no Miko instead

Saidai Mao => in Japanese, this should probably be Saidai no Mao. 

Zhongguo => This threw me off because it's the Chinese term rather than Japanese.  In Japanese, this should be Chugoku


Zyren (Chapter 42) - Tue 15 Sep 2015

*gasp* Kento is the spy?! Why Kento Why!!! I liked him. I can't wait to see how this plays out though. 


M-Angel 05 (Chapter 42) - Tue 15 Sep 2015

Awesome chapter. I love that Kagome and Kimi are becoming friends; kinda. ^_^


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