Reviews for To Go Onward by kaoruhana

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Cynthia Sheffield (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Jun 2021

Oh, my heart ???????????????????? what a heart wrenching story! And oh, so beautifully done!


Nile (Chapter 4) - Fri 30 Nov 2018

I think there's like less than 2 dozen fanfics, of the few thousand SessKag fanfics, that I've cried. You've done well piecing this story together and drawing me into it where I could feel how Kagome felt as Sesshoumaru's health was deteriorating, and then, when he passed.

Well done fanfic!


DeathDagger (Chapter 3) - Sat 27 Sep 2014

Omg! I have tears! You killed him!!:-(

 


Nicole (Chapter 4) - Sun 15 Dec 2013

I cried at the end of chapter three, and the beginning of this chapter. I enjoyed the ending - it fits. You did a wonderful job with this story :)


Nicole (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Dec 2013

*stunned*

Wow, that's a different beginning. I'm intrigued, and looking forward to reading the rest :)


Stella Mira (Chapter 4) - Fri 15 Nov 2013

This was such a lovely and bittersweet story with a very well thought out plot! I'm so sad for Sesshomaru, but at least he wasn't alone in his time of need and he will always be remembered with fondness. And Kagome was able to move on and live a happy life!

Tanku for sharing this story, Kaoru-chan! Love it!


Luna C. (Chapter 4) - Mon 11 Nov 2013

This story is so sad! I can't believe Sesshomaru died. But I'm glad that Kagome had the will to move on! Great job on this story!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Nov 2013

Sad, keep it coming. 


Wunderberry (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Nov 2013

This may sound a little odd but...

I think this was sadder than Tales from the House of the Moon.

I know that must sound like I'm crazy but I'm not, I swear. This ending had mad balling. Perhaps it was the scenes where Kagome was talking to Sesshomaru's grave that were more emotional to me. Actually, yea that's it.

As for the pairing, I was really thinking that was how things were going to end up. When he started comforting her, I knew that this is Akira x Kagome. It was wondering if maybe you would find a way to send her back but I wasn't expecting that. The story is called To Go Onward after all, and the best symbol of going forward is always continuing in life. 

Thanks for sharing!


Zoku (Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

Thank you for the great fic!

It was nicely paced, a good length and the chapters felt full and well written.

I really enjoyed reading it!

Well Done!

 


Himura Asami (Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

I think I cried because she didn't end up with Sesshomaru. It was a good story, but I still cried.

For some reason, I really like how it ended, even though I'm still crying.

You really are an amazing writer.

Job well done!


KT (Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

... I can't believe it, I am crying right now. It is such an important lesson to appreciate what we have now, our time with others. It was a beautifully written story. Good job!


Cathy Sharon (Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

oh no. . sesshomaru don't die please ! :(


Leahchan13 (Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Nov 2013

Oh my gosh I can't stop crying! Even though I knew it was gonna happen! That just proves how amazing of an author you are! I can't wait until the next update!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Nov 2013

Great chapter, keep it coming.


Himura Asami (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Nov 2013

How can you have a happy ending with this. 

My nose is snotting up and everything! 


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Nov 2013

I read this story while I was working. ..bad idea!!! I was crying so badly and oh god, I had a knot in my throat all the time. But I have to say, regardless of the angst,  its a very nice piece of work. I enjoyed reading it very much. Great job


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 Nov 2013

Keep it coming. 


kitsune (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 Nov 2013

Wow. I love the story. I mean it's sad, but very different than most things I have read these days. . . my only question. . . in the first chapter, you said that his arm had been amputated, but in the second chapter it sounds as if he has both arms when they are going up the steps. But I really love the story and can't wait for the rest!


Himura Asami (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 Nov 2013

This is so sad. I hate sad stories, but I can't not read this!

It's too interesting! 


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