it was a very interesting story. But, I'd go back and put much more details into the story.....like the battle, how Kagome got the idea to escape, how she was able to unlock her powers to escape with a seal on her powers, how she and her father kept her powers a secret, why didn't Sesshomaru visit Kagome and get her used to him (like court her), why he has Kagome and Sango in his office (how did he capture them or how they became in the castle)......

Also, a flashback in a flashback is a bit much ;) And lastly, I'd get a beta and try to correct the grammatical errors.

But the story is a wonderful idea, it's different than what I've read before and it's got a lot of potential.

enjoyed this story!

With the exception of some spelling errors, this story was enjoyable. A sequel would be nice :) ---Good job!

This story was amazing!