Dramatic

Very interesting start.  No Kikyo hate? A rare feat within it's self. I like it so far, typos and all.

Cool!

Cool!

which one is the warning

attempted rape on kagome?

or acid on member

@ Selina Maru

I know i may have over done it a smidge however for my particular storyline it was needed. I didn't get any comaplaints from the other reviews otherwise i would have changed it.

If i made the characters exactly the same as the TV where would the fun be? i have read other stories where Inuyasha is a bad guy and has been punished by his friends. I just gave my own version. There also more detailed stories of torture than mine.

How have i over done the Inuyasha torture? i thought what i wrote was mild? To me it wasn't that descriptive. As i said before i didn't get any (apart from yours) complaints about what i have written, i would welcome feedback though

Uhmm what on earth is going on? Thats a little too much. You over did the Inuyasha torture. Its sound really cheesy like you were trying to bard.miroku would do the mud thing and Sango would siply yell, curse and hit him with her boomerang. But none of them would go so far as to seriojsly damage Inuyasha despite his stupidity. They are the good guys with a conscienc this story seems a bit unbelievable

Aw I can't believe it's over! This was an awesome story!

This last chapter was HOT!! The story was amazing and I enjoyed it!

What a great ending to a great story :)

Yeah I decided not to return Inuysha as he had been a very bad boy indeed. Basicly The west turned into a sort of heaven for those pure of heart. Kikyo was forgiven for what she did and got the life she wanted just without Inuysha.

*scratches head* So....Inuyasha's still stuck on that island, perhaps out of his mind with his obsession with Kagome and seeing Sesshomaru's face every time he hunts for food? Most likely, he doesn't know that everyone else, except Kikyo, became Gods. Just curious.

loved this story! great chapter!

It's about time!!!! Naraku got what he deserved :) wow

Great chapter, keep it coming.

good start, keep it up!

this chapter was awesome! can't wait to see what happens next!

great chapter!

That was the perfect torture for that evil bastard!! I can't wait to see what you have planned next.

Ohhh I'm so excited ... Bout time Naraku gets what he deserves!!! :)