*gasp* And Naraku's back. I was sad when Kagome found out that her friends were killed... :( That was least expected... I was hoping to see more of them but I guess not. Well, I recently started this fanfiction and didn't review until now since I've finally caught up to your pace. :D Well, keep up the great work! Can't wait until the next one!
--nao-chan
WTF! How the hell is Naraku stronger than before? I would like to know what has happened to Naraku after Kagome supposedly killed him. And will Kagome ever forgive Andres? It been a very long time since you updated... I was starting to think that you had forgotten about your loyal fic readers. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Poor Kagome. Naraku is one sick bastard lol. Update soon! Peace.
REDWOLF (Chapter 26) - Wed 05 May 2010
Woe, Kagome is going to need something to fight for. Kagome is in a sad situatiom now, I hope she can get help. Great chapter!
sunset in love (Chapter 26) - Wed 05 May 2010
oh my, and how will she fight him?
points for sesshoumaru i guess. though i was starting to really like andres. oh well.
You did a pretty good job considering that you didn't want to get caught by your prof. And I really loved how dark this chappie was... I liked how you portrayed a very broken and pained Kagome. I wonder what Kagome will do now that her Maidens are gone? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
o.o AWESOME! poor Kagome though! anders >:l stupid dragon!
REDWOLF (Chapter 25) - Tue 09 Feb 2010
We need some Kagome power here. Go Kagome, open a can of whip a$$ on them! Fantastic chapter!
no lemon por favor, imply it all you want, but I just don't think it would fit that well with the way the story's going (not that I disapprove of this pairing, it's only that if are you going to put a lemon it should be w/ Sesshoumaru and Kagome (the first one at least))
I say 'lemon it up, babe!'
Great job so far, by the way. Looking forward to an update soon.
Intense chapter that I loved! Keep it up, hon!
Couldn't Andres have smelled whether Kagome had been intimate with Sesshou? How could be say something like that to her. I wonder if Andres knows that Kagome has been in a coma for three days. And I'm curious about how Andres will deal with the consequences of his actions... will he regret being intimate with Kagura? And what will Kagome think when she finds out? Will she even care? Also, I don't think you should post the Andres/Kagura lemon unless Kagome finds out about it and gives her opinion on the matter.
I think if I was in Kagome's shoes, I would just run away on my own to let off some steam. Maybe she can go hangout with her Maidens and see if they know anything about Naraku coming back. Also, how did Andres betray Kagome in the past? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
REDWOLF (Chapter 24) - Tue 26 Jan 2010
Love the chapter, but just knowing Kagura is having sex with him is enough for me. If it were Sess/Kag, that would be different. I miss Sess not being in this chapter with his witty comebacks.
i dont mind so long as we get papa with random snack foods again >:3
REDWOLF (Chapter 24) - Tue 12 Jan 2010
Woe! Kagome is gonna have problems with this...Sesshoumaru better be as strong as he says he is because Kagome will surely die this time. Well you have accomplished your goal of Kagome's problems being terrible, I feel sorry for her. Great chapter!
Now, that is a start... At least Kagome isn't comatose. But what now? Will things be different between Kagome and Sesshou? Or will they go back to the way things were? And where the hell is Andres? Do the Maidens know of Naraku's return? Please update soon and keep up the good work. :P
awe poor kaggie!
OMG i can't believe you just left it there, ahh!! When Kagome was explaining what Naraku might have done to survive that was pretty gross, but at the same time it was believeable when you think of such a vile character as him. That was quite a nice way to get Kagome up again, sort of like the magical kiss in all those fairy tales, but a whole lot less cheesy!! Thanks for another great chapter, and i hope you feel better soon.
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