Hey why have you stopped updating?! Keep going I love your story!

I really enjoy your story and i would love if you could update soon. its really awesome! Please and thank-you! Lady Kidakadash

I really enjoy your story and i would love if you could update soon. its really awesome! Please and thank-you! Lady Kidakadash

Awwwwwwww! I need another chapter!! This is a great story! I really enjoyed reading it! Hehehe, Sesshoumaru has been getting is butt handed to him =D Love it love it LOVE IT! Update soon please!

ahhhh please write more! This story is so good!

cool fic cant wai to read. more.

So since this wasn't a very long chapter I'm not sure how long my review will be. Anyways. I like how you give insight on how Kagome has to deal with her internal battles and stuff. I love how Andres is there for her. Can't wait to see how much of this Sess can deal with before he snaps. LOL. So keep it up girly. You know I'll wait for more! *huggles*

I thought it was sweet of Kagura! I hope to see more of this side of her. KAgome breaking down is not surprising, that terror that Naraku made her inflict is not something that one can simply forget. I just hope that this doesn't cause issues between Kouga and Kagome.

another wonderful chapter update! i love this story and the details you put into it.

I loved this chapter! It shows Kagome's pain, remorse and vulnerability and also the softer side of Kagura (which is so cool...). Of course the addition of Andres is always appreciated! He's a sexy beast... LOL! And now I shall sit here and wait while you type...

This was a nice chappie even though it was a sad one. I really hope Kagome can find some peace in the future. You did a great job depicting Kagome' vulnerable side. Keep up the good work and update soon :P

OMG, that chapter was so sad. It made my eyes tear up. But anyhow great story and I can't wait for your next chapter. Update soon

I love this story still waiting for sesshoumaru to catch up.

aaAAaa!! update again sooooOOOn!

i personally love your story! You write it well. I still need to catch up, i am waiting for a rainy day so i have something to look forward to. Don't worry about individual readers. you write for an audiance and yourself and you do it well. Thank you for posting your work for us to enjoy. And believe me we do. Its a daring thing to put yourself out there expecially with something as personaly as writing, so dont be discouraged. know that we liove you and can't wait for you to update.

:pounces you: where are you?!?!

some of Andres' spanish is incorrect. e.g. Ch. 14 - "What are you doing" would be either: ?Que haces tu? or more formal ?Que hace Ud.? (Andres has mixed together tu with hace which doesn't work, also it sounds really odd to put the tu before the haces -- he could also just leave off the tu or the Ud. and that would be OK as well, e.g. "?Que haces?" (or alternatively: ?Que estas haciendo?).) Also, sometimes Andres switches between informal (tu) versus formal (Ud.) -- based on other aspects of their relationship (him sending her sex dreams, for example) it seems he'd always refer to Kagome as "tu" and never as Ud. Just a FYI since you provided translations