Reviews for Neighbor Wars by MissTeak

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Fish Wishes (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

Epic.

Thank you so much for writing this! I'm silly with laguther, and I really enjoy the witty remarks! The style is simple and sweet, but when details are important they are there. It allows the reader to have both imagination, but guidence. Brillant! I cannot wait for more.


TruGemini (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

LOL! Oooohhh, that wil really get under Sess' skin.


Kinkyfairy33 (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

very cute story! i'm loving the personalities! update soon!


emerald skye (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

HAHAHA! Trust Kagome to stir it all up with a yawn! Had me giggling like mad... :)


DestinysTears (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

LOL I loved Kagome's sarcastic applause. She sure knows how to get under his skin, hehe. >:3

 

I have to say Jaz, you're extremely good at keeping these drabble installations a nice, consistent length! I seriously don't know how you do it. And on top of that, you get the whole point of the chapter across, without being too concise or wordy. It's like a perfect balance... Hmm.. Let me try to think of an analogy... Ah.

 

You are like the perfectly browned marshmallow. Not burnt and black and crusty, and not undercooked where the insides are still hard and cold either. Perfectly. Browned. ^^ Can't wait for the next one!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 10) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

bahahahahaha... wuh oh, looks like Kagome's in trouble now *snicker* guess it's only a matter of time before Sessho goes totally bonkers... can't wait!!!


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 9) - Sun 10 Jul 2011

hehehehe...  Fate has a grand and perverse sense of humor.  XD

 


TruGemini (Chapter 9) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

LOL! So silly!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 9) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

awww they learn to share!!! ^_^ maybe there's hope for them yet! great job!


DestinysTears (Chapter 9) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

Talk about awkward~! I wonder how they'll split that last piece of gyoza... >:3


emerald skye (Chapter 9) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

Oh, my. They never give up, do they? Course it makes for such wonderful entertainment though :)


Mary (Chapter 8) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

Wow, did you make Kagome a big mess and disaster....


Sesshoumaru's Lady (Chapter 8) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

Poor Kagome!  Still the day from hell!  Hopefully she gets a break soon.... She needs it... Can't wait to see what you have in store for this wonderful couple... lol!


Caleesci (Chapter 8) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

Miss Teak,

I enjoy your stories very much. This story has a wonderful portrayal of the characters. Not going to lie, I have a pink push up bra that says "Bitchy" on it so that made me laught pretty hard. Don't judge it was a gag gift! Anyways love the story, love the character portrayal, keep it coming!

Caleesci


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 8) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

*snickers* I like this version of an 'evil' Kikyo. *sly grin* I really do.

High Ones... what she's done though... basically punishing them BOTH -that's CLASSIC. ^_^ Like grabbing two children in a fight and making them both get along not caring who actually threw the first punch or angry word. CLASSIC.

Thanks so much for writing!


emerald skye (Chapter 8) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

And evil Kikyo strikes again! Though she's not really evil even though she may enjoy torturing Kagome. Poor Kags... But really it IS for her own good, and one day, she'll THANK Kikyo. Just not anytime soon ;)


DestinysTears (Chapter 8) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

DUN Dun dunnnnnnnnn... Well, Kagome has a handful to take care of now! I cannot wait to see what troubles are in store for these two! I can just imagine the smug look on Sesshomaru's face during all this! LOL

Poor, poor Kagome... Can't wait till the next one!


Sesshoumaru's Lady (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

Oh poor Kagome!  She's not having a good day huh?  lol!  Not only are they neighbors but they have to along side each other... This will definately get interesting going forward... Keep up the great work!


Forfirith (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

lol'ed so much xD

Update soon~


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

hehehe.

I knew it.  XD

 


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