Reviews for Neighbor Wars by MissTeak

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lashon (Chapter 16) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

aww! poor dokuga :) she jus got left lol.  p.s. i'm glad you updated again. i almost thought you werent gonna finish the story


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 16) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

*convulses in giggles* I LOVE Dokuga's thoughts at the end! ^_^ Booyaka! And the little old couple... PRICELESS!!

Thanks for writing!


Saraniya (Chapter 16) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

Poor Dokuga! I want the doggy more than I want her owner now!


NysrinaNotLoggedIn (Chapter 15) - Sun 17 Jul 2011

You had me chuckling through most of the chapters. But the title on this one had me cackling! XD

Would there be any chapter titled "Double confirmed?" XD


Saraniya (Chapter 15) - Sat 16 Jul 2011

I love Kagome in this even though I swear I hate the fact she's so lazy she's just so devious and brilliant!


DestinysTears (Chapter 15) - Sat 16 Jul 2011

Lol. You know, I really like how you wrote Kagome ripping off Sesshomaru like that. I know that might be a little strange, but honestly. It's a refreshing and new way to things. I would think most would write her as being kind and generous about the situation and take little to nothing in exchange. But here, you give us her honest feelings about the situation, and confident in what she says. I love it! It's very clever!

Btw, I apologize for not reading your latest updates sooner! I've been a little busy lately, so I haven't had the chance. But as always, you've done a wonderful job, and you're wonderful at writing! This story is short and sweet, and it brightens my day to read each installment!


DestinysTears (Chapter 14) - Sat 16 Jul 2011

I can completely picture Kagome groaning and crawling out of bed, haha. Eek! But what a cliffhanger! On to the next one!


DestinysTears (Chapter 13) - Sat 16 Jul 2011

Ah! The first time Sesshomaru says her name! I love how you made him pause a little to show his slight discomfort at using it. And when you decribed what happened the night before - oh my gosh, that was hysterical! Clever little chapter, Jazz. Well done!


DestinysTears (Chapter 12) - Sat 16 Jul 2011

Aw, I loved this chapter. The scene was so subtely sweet! I really like the part where Sesshomaru is explaining "Man in the City" to Kagome. The description of the book itself was interesting and really gave the scene depth. Wonderful writing!


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 15) - Sat 16 Jul 2011

ROFL!


emerald skye (Chapter 15) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

Dang, that girl's slick!!! Who woulda thunk it? And poor Sess. What a sucker :)


TruGemini (Chapter 15) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

Score 1 for Kagome. I have a feeling she won't be able to gloat long.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 15) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

HAHA that's awesome she got her way!!! I hope she takes good care of Dokuga though, maybe that'll soften Sessho up a bit lol. Great job!


Kinkyfairy33 (Chapter 14) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

ooooooooooo, a favor? i can't wait to see what it is! update soon!


darksilvercloud (Chapter 14) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

*Thumbs up* LOL. I can see why this is a personal favourite of yours. hahahahahahaha


Ashes (Chapter 14) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

Oh ho! The plot thickens!

I'm really enjoying these bits of verbal battle and alliance between apartment dwellers. Reminds me of home.


Vivi (Chapter 14) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

That was such a cute chapter!  It's my first time reading shorts like yours, and I'm really hooked.  Thank you for updating


TruGemini (Chapter 14) - Thu 14 Jul 2011

Yeah, that was super funny. I can see the whole caterpillar movements to the dor to open it.


TruGemini (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 Jul 2011

LOL! Really kago, was that the best you could come up with? You were doing better by just blowing smoke. LOL!


m. (Chapter 14) - Thu 14 Jul 2011

I just adore your story. Characters are portrayed wonderfully. Its cute and quirky with a side of humor. =]
The only thing is that I wish I liked Kag's character a little more. While I relate to some of her *ahem* awesomeness, i wish she were a more likable character... I can't help but find that she's rather annoying and extremely immature. But the method to your madness will work everything out and keep everything entertaining. <3


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