I'm SOOOOOOOOO happy you finally updated, but NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.......I can't believe you left us with such a hugeeeee cliffy. I hope you'll update again soon. Hope Kagome will be ok...seems like her power may be returning because of her concern for her unborn baby. PLEASE...please...please...update soon. I'm offering virtual cookies & ice cream with a cherry on top ;)
Even though the subject matter is very grim, your descriptive skills are nonetheless poetic and beautiful...
tika_taki (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
THANK UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU..... for updating it!!!
now, please update it VERY SOOOOOOOOOONNNNN :))
NO! Oh, Kagome!
I just found this story today and it's amazing so far! I would kill to have even half your talent. You are a very good writer and I can't wait fo you to update soon!
I'm glad you updated even though this was a very sick and upsettihng chapter. I really hope that Sesshoumaru finds out what's happening before it's too late and rips his mother and those ment apart. How sick can you get to think it would even be okay.
Saeko (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
Omg what a cliffhanger!!!!
If you take long to update this one, I think I'm going to have to kill you, because this is the first time in a long while that I've been this wound up about seeing the next chapter of a fanfic.
Please update soon?!!
Also, near the beginning of Kagome's perspective, you have 'smell scent' when she's avoiding strong noses. I think you need to choose one or the other. xD
katlady (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
OK I'll say it NOOOOO FAIRRRRR
YOUVE BEEEN GONE FOR HOW LONG AND LEAVE US HANGING shame on you
OOOOOH you better up date soon or I will throw R0os Plunnies at you
okay with that said welcome back XD and great up date
Jenis Miranda (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
| waaa!!! oh no!!! ugh. what a cliffhanger!! i cant believe kagome is pregnant! thats crazy! and if even one of those jerks touches her.... oooo, sesshy is gonna bring the pain!
i'm glad to see you remembered this story! its great to see an update. :) i'm enjoying every chapter and looking forward to more!. *evil grin* mwahaha.
(woops, i forgot to sign in! :P)
m. (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
please tell me you're going to update soon. I love this story and i love your work, but its hard to support you when its one chptr every couple months. great work with the story
| I just read this whole thing in one sitting and all I have to say is...amazing! This is a fantastic story and I have added it to my favorites! Please update soon I hope that Sesshoumaru can get to her in time!
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG Please tell me the next chapter is on it's way!!! This ending might just kill me!! I hope her holy power explodes and kills all around her!!! Please tell me Sesshoumaru finds out and destroys his bitch of a mother!!! This is some great writing and you've got me on the edge of my seat gasping for more!!!!!
please, tell me she will get out of this in one piece! that she will kill them, purify them right there and then!
where is sesshomaru when you need him! *whimper*
jojo661538 (Chapter 12) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
l love this story keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
NAO-chan33 (Chapter 12) - Tue 22 Dec 2009
I love this story. :D Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I wanna know what kind of danger Kagome is in... lol
--nao-chan
| Wow. What a great story! Please update soon.
| It's really great so far. But you may want to go though and reread it a bit cause I found some minor spelling, grammar errors. I can't wait to finish reading the rest of it though. You're a great writer.
Addy (Chapter 12) - Sun 13 Sep 2009
| So sad, and happy. I hope you post again soon.
| Chapter 12 seems to come from left field. I thought I’d missed a chapter so I went all the way back to chapter 8 & started skimming & discovered that the chapter really didn’t make much sense, at the end of chapter 11 S&K are in bed after having sex, she’s asleep & he’s guarding her & then the next chapter she’s waking up a willow tree & Sess is talking to Shippo in his study at an odd hour. The only thing that makes sense is the Rin/Kohaku bit & even then where did Kohaku come from? Does he make it a habit to wander around Sess’s castle with Kirara or what?
stars (Chapter 12) - Fri 21 Aug 2009
| please updata sooner
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