i really like this new piece you've started.  i love how light and fluffy it is while keeping true to the characters, given time.  can't wait to see more!

So, she’d obviously fallen into a parallel universe where instead of melting mikos, Taiyokai sniffed mikos. Of course. <--- hahahah

yus

i ♥ you ^_^

no toe popping YET... but r0o wants more!

I'm so greedy!

sometimes i ♥ you

and then sometimes i want to sit on your back  and then pull your toes until they pop

b/c you make such awesome fiction, and i hafta wait for more...

so mean to us making us wait for such awesomesauce stories

*flops at you feet dramatically wiggling c0okies at you*

more please!

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This is very promising! I'm looking forward to the rest of your story ^^

<3 Nao

....I'm looking forward to this. ^.^

Okay, I'm hooked. ;) This looks like such an interesting story, and though I see some slight similarities to other plots and schemes, you've definitiely taken them and made them your own!  I look forward to seeing more.

OMG YOU TEASE!!!! YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!!!!!! WHERE IS THE REST OF IT?!I

Fabulous beginning!  Grabbed my attention and my admiration at the writing.  Hope to read more very soon. 

I like it a lot so far, very interesting, nice and long and very very well witten! Keep up the great work and update soon, I really want to read more.

Nice hook. Shippo's adult characterization is delightful!