please continue!!! I would love to see more of this....
Chikao is a wonderful addition! Such a funny old turtle ^.^ Thank you for updating!
de-amo (Chapter 6) - Thu 02 Dec 2010
| ive liked ur fic so far but in this chap, i feel as if uve made kags way too much of a clutz that shes lookin like a mentally-challenged girl n not d matured immortal she is; common, shes been alive for about 500 yrs that by now she shouldve perfected her motor-skills even when nervous. women r known 2 b great multitaskers after all; its unbelivable that she cant even hadle somethin as simple as tea pouring & talkin @ d same time!
and her virginal reactions have ME rollin me eyes. even if she is a 500+ yr old virgin shes acting like shes still 15 n never seen a half naked man before wen she was always surrouned by gorgeous demons in feudal times, sometimes half naked, & i never saw her blush like an idiot. shes a girl w/roots from d 21st century, not some simpleton village-girl.
*squees at you* that's just too cute!
BEAUTIFUL!!! I love it when you update!
hahaha! Sesso catching fish with his mouth? Priceless! I love love love this story! I cant wait to read more!
Rosalind (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Nov 2010
another lovely chapter to this adorable fic, though now i'm more curious than ever as to what it is that sesshomaru wants of totosai
looking forward to the next addition!
I have loved EVERY chapter so far. This is such a sweet story and one well-worth saving and re-reading again and again and again...
Need more though!
GAH! this is sooo AMAZING! I want to read more. I hope you update soon because I'm in love with this story.
*cackles in amusment* " dude, we just had a food fight." hahahahahahaha i ♥ this!
Rosalind (Chapter 4) - Mon 29 Nov 2010
this is getting really good! i'm loving it so far, interesting choice making sesshomaru a mangaka, i agree with shippo that it's not really what i pictured him doing but then it does work out pretty well i suppose and of course sesshomaru's stuff would make up many of the most successful titles around
really looking forward to when you next update!
Every story you write grabs me by the shirtfront and drags me along, totally enthralled! Why would I think this one would be any different? You've baited your hook and caught this fish - I can't wait for the next chapter!
L-desu (Chapter 3) - Sat 27 Nov 2010
what a wonderful chapter! thank god Chouko is not Rin; that would have been awkward. i do like how you incorporated their scents into the mix as well. that's a point many people miss when dealing with inuyoukai and reincarnations.
0o0o0o0o0o i LOVES this! I bet if pushed kagome would do some damage to that puppy over that!
i like! i like a lot! what's gonna happen next ^_^???????
Blaire (Chapter 3) - Fri 26 Nov 2010
Interesting chapter :D the way you portray sesshomaru and kagome is very well done :D
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